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An Old and Trusted Friend

Tree branches bowed under the weight of the snow, like penitents kneeling, as Christmas shoppers reveled in the joy of the season. I left the house and struggled through the snow-clogged streets to meet a man I hadn't seen in years. He was the model of discretion, a confidant. I could always count on his fidelity and trust. I shivered, pulled the scarf more tightly round my neck, and pushed my way through the milling crowds to await his arrival. And there he was. The old familiar shambling gait, the oft-worn brown fedora perched upon his head, and suddenly I felt better. I chose a dimly lighted tavern. We ordered drinks and dinner; linguini and shrimp, a dish for which we shared a common relish. Our conversation was tentative at first, until the effects of the alcohol loosened our tongues, and we talked of Oxford, days full of happy memories. But later, as the evening wore on and the tavern's customers left with errands of their own, we were left alone. Silence descended. Thoughts of earlier in the day came crashing down upon me. He sensed something was wrong, as he always did. "She left me," I blurted out, sobbing uncontrollably. He said nothing, and gently squeezed my hand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/4/2016 7:32:00 PM
is there any type of poem that you can't write brilliantly? i've yet to see one, keith. ~ this one is wonderful and the end is heart-wrenching but perfect...
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/5/2016 4:49:00 AM
Thanks Ilene... this was on the occasion of my divorce. John was a big help to me. Best wishes, Keith
Date: 1/4/2016 6:17:00 PM
Oh my dear I'm happy to know that you've such a great friend by your side like John , your lucky as much as he's lucky to have you....beautiful write as usual......hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 1/4/2016 3:34:00 PM
Oh such sad vivid imagery Keith I can picture the scene so clearly - the final two lines left a lump in my throat:-( Hugs Jan xx7
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/4/2016 3:41:00 PM
Oh Keith that is so so sad - you are so lucky to have a loyal trusted friend to confide in and help you through troubled times:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/4/2016 3:38:00 PM
Thanks Jan... autobiographical... John was my buddy from college. I went to visit HIM after my wife told me she wanted a divorce. He was a big help to me...

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