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An Ode To Your Beauty-04

On that moment Time froze And the Ocean Paused to breathe And tried reading My eyes and me, What were the feelings That thrilled and chilled me! ! Your looks vis-a-vis had pulled away Me out of me... The Earth and the sky and the Ocean Nothing existed around. Nothing except that beauty celestial Emanating from your eyes Filling elegance around me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/1/2017 6:04:00 AM
I have read all four of your odes. They all are very beautiful. Probably as beautiful as the person you are writing them for. You have image-rich language. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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