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An Ode To Love

When we so chose, to manifest on earth, Stirrings of love divine, brought forth a pulse; Our innate aliveness, bubbling with mirth, Humming resonation with God’s impulse, Feeling by touch, each offered sensation, In playful, blissful, childlike innocence. Heart outpoured joy in spontaneous verse, Soul aligned as one with all creation, Dwelt in glory of God’s magnificence ~ Exuberance had no need to rehearse. Our body had it’s need, fuelled by greed; Gripped by desire, our mind was in a fog. Stirrings of ego, soon started to breed, Boon now bane, tail began wagging the dog. Baton of awareness shifted to mind. Insentient to love, our heart grew cold, Enslaved by lust, we had nowhere to hide, Bound head to foot in ego’s ruthless bind. Love became a trade, soul to devil sold, Our heart contacted, though God dwelt inside. Back to the start, the time our soul was free; By God’s grace, we melded head with our heart, Throb of love as conscience, our referee, Soul’s radiance restored as work of art. Love in love with love offers no excuse, Beauteous, all embracing, lyrical. Bubbling effervescence is it’s delight; Presence then succumbs not to ego’s ruse, An epitome of God’s miracle, Love drenched soul again glows as living light. 10-May-2022 10 syllables per line ~ HMS Rhyme pattern: ababcdecde  fgfghijhij  klklmnomno ~ Rhymezone Grammar ~ PS Theme: Love Form O- Ode- New poems Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 6:44 AM
Seeker, wonderful and lovely poem, and congratulations on your win in my Ode contest, blessings ~Constance
Seeker Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 9:21 PM
Thanks to you, Constance, I learnt yet another form!
Ray Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 3:06 PM
the power of love...at times blind, deaf, and mute....yet the coin is many-sided...line by line you expose them all, great piece
Seeker Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 8:08 PM
Thank you, Tim
Dietrich Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 7:32 PM
An ode to love is most befitting you, Unseeking Seeker. Congrats . I am glad to finally have seen this one.
Seeker Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 7:34 PM
Thank you, Andrea, so happy you enjoyed :)
Roper Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 11:09 AM
Congratulations on your win , US, in Constance's Ode. Blessings my friend
Seeker Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 7:33 PM
Thank you, Eve!
George Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 10:14 PM
When love comes to dwell within us, heart sings and soul gets aligned with all creation ! A stunning write. Congratulations on your win, Seeker friend !
Seeker Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 11:40 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 12:36 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a "Wonderful" write/picture. Have a blessed day writing away....................
Seeker Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 6:16 PM
Thank you, dear Paula. Hope you’re doing well
Kauffman Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 10:16 AM
Seeker, BIG congratulations for your win. Every line is a masterpiece one flowing from the inspired verse of the previous line - one wondrous piece of wisdom after another. It truly is a summation of you and your personal journey! This is a fav for me!!! Blessings! Also, I want to thank you for your placement of Remnants of Eden United. What an honor! Your themes always take me on a pilgrimage into new places. I am so grateful. Thank you!
Seeker Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 6:16 PM
Thank you, Sam! As you’ve astutely observed, it is a personal journey, a journey we each take, in our own way, at our own pace, enabled by God’s grace.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 2:04 AM
If you wrote this poem in spontaneous verse, then you are a master poet. I know how difficult I found it. Otherwise it is a great poem deserves high place. Best for a win.
Seeker Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 4:48 AM
It wasn’t difficult to write Victor, however first time I’ve employed this form, following the contest requirements specified
Dutta Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 10:41 PM
Love is Divine.
Seeker Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 11:13 PM
Indeed it is, thank you for your visit, Anisha, God bless
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