Balveen Cheema Poet Romanticism

An Ode To Hyades

Silhouetted my love stood,
With scant disdain to melting drops,
A smile touched her cherubic face,
When Zephyr touched her silky locks,
That kissed her misty eyes.

Up she raised her face,
And drank in the wine of love,
That Hyades had poured into her quivering lips,
Quenching every corner of her heart with love.

Tilting her head softly,
She turned with her doe like eyes,
As if beckoning me,
While she slowly glided nymph like 
Into the cloudy drizzle.



(July 24, 2015)

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Constance La France October 17, 2015 at 4:48 PM Balveen, I wanted to read your first poem here and it is so lovely, a beautiful 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, Dads Workshop ~~ Balveen Cheema October 17, 2015 at 10:42 PM How kind and thoughtful of you, Wings! This, infact, is my first poem written in Sept., 2014. I started penning my thoughts and emotions after this, when one of my friends goaded me to. Love, Balveen

Robert Lindley August 1, 2015 at 10:29 PM Big congrats on a sweet win! A7 Balveen Cheema August 2, 2015 at 8:57 AM Thanks Robert! It means a lot!

Laura Leiser July 30, 2015 at 2:27 PM Congrats on your win, Balveen :) Balveen Cheema August 2, 2015 at 8:58 AM Many thanks, Laura! Balveen Cheema July 30, 2015 at 2:45 PM Thanks Laura!

Casarah Nance July 30, 2015 at 7:33 AM Mythical and magical, awesome contest entry and win Balveen Cheema July 30, 2015 at 2:46 PM Love your compliment!

Jan Allison July 30, 2015 at 4:01 AM The imagery is delightful Balveen - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Balveen Cheema July 30, 2015 at 9:45 AM Thanks Jan! It sounds so nice-on your win! Balveen Cheema July 30, 2015 at 9:44 AM Thanks Jan! It sounds so nice-on your win!

Skat A July 30, 2015 at 3:43 AM Balveen, Congratulations on your SHWEET Free Verse Win. **SKAT** Balveen Cheema July 30, 2015 at 2:41 PM Thanks! I'm happy that you appreciate it!

Poet Destroyer A July 30, 2015 at 2:28 AM Hi Balveen, now this one is breathtaking. You placed a beautiful tribute of love to one of my favorite clusters. I enjoyed your poem. congratulations.... LINDA Balveen Cheema July 30, 2015 at 2:47 PM Thanks! Simply love Love!

Lee Carter July 30, 2015 at 12:38 AM Congrats on your win very sweet poem! ~lee Balveen Cheema July 30, 2015 at 2:48 PM Thanks Lee! Sweet of you to find my poem sweet!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 29, 2015 at 11:54 PM A perfectly penned poem Balveen! Love the imagery, warm welcome to the soup my friend, stay blessed n let your wonderful words flow! Congrats on ur win! Balveen Cheema July 30, 2015 at 2:49 PM If a critic appreciates my imagery, my heart is overwhelmed, Upma!

Andrea Dietrich July 29, 2015 at 11:50 PM Very lovely imagery you have shown here. I could envision this goddess. Congrats for the win in my contest. Balveen Cheema July 30, 2015 at 2:53 PM Andrea I'm elated if my poem could create the imagery of the goddess! More wins in your next contests!

Poet Destroyer A July 24, 2015 at 6:32 PM Balveen, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A July 23, 2015 at 6:55 PM Balveen, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT