An Ode To Florence

The sacred lily of antiquity;
                      vital, that centuries have not defied.
                           Treasures, luminaries of Italy;
                         a preserved cultured city, dignified.
                             Basilica on the mount arises;
                   "The Gate of Heaven" takes my breath away.
                         The dome cap nestles above the city;
                             A vista opens to new horizons, 
                       Cathedral bells ring, calling me to pray;
                     outside, minstrels in song, bold and witty. 


                 On the old bridge, wares for sale are displayed.
                          A passage, above the River Arno;
                self- portraits, don the walls; masters portrayed.
                      Bronzed doors, a journey to The Inferno; 
                           afficionados of art come to praise. 
                    Sculptures come alive in the public square;
                     Uffizi's galleries, patrons are drawn 
                      to the genius of masters, are amazed.
                        The passion of "bel canto" fills the air;
              night falls, your cobbled streets, dim, until dawn.

                     In marbled tombs lay national heroes; 
                    maestros who impart the gifts of sages. 
                      The Sacred Crucifix hangs in sorrow,
                       over consecrated ground, it graces.
                     A tapestry of life's virtues you share.
                      To the titans of art, we owe a debt.
              Saints and prophets, their relics you enshrine; 
                     devoted in faith we kneel in prayer.
                   David's majestic strength, Goliath met.
                       Florence's gifts, a legacy, divine!



May 4, 2022
For: Form O-Ode-New Poems Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
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Syllables verified on Howmanysyllables.com
Theme: Place
Placed 3rd in contest
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La France Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 6:54 AM
Paulette, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my Ode contest, blessings ~Constance
Dietrich Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 7:42 PM
oh yes, I do recall this one. So nice to see it again on the winners' list. Congrats, Paulette.
Calasibetta Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 12:19 PM
Thanks Andrea~I scrolled down~you had previously replied, thinking you might be reading a poem about Florence Nightingale…..Glad you like it. And a big win for you too. :)Paulette
Roper Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 11:14 AM
Congratulations on your win , Paulette, in Constance's Ode. Blessings my friend
Calasibetta Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 11:31 AM
Thank you Eve~a challenging write and happy to have placed. Thanks for stopping to visit my page. :)Paulette
Goldsmith Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 1:28 PM
Congratulations on this win. A wonderful tribute to "Florence." Enjoy your win and day with blessings...........
Calasibetta Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 11:32 AM
Thank you Paula~I love Florence, one of my favorite cities, I only can dream of returning~for now anyway. :)Paulette
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 4:59 PM
oh I am so silly. I was expecting this to be about Florence Nightingale! But instead it's a delightful ode to a wonderful city!!
Calasibetta Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 11:44 AM
LOL! It is funny you thought that because after I completed the Ode....I thought the same thing you did~Are people expecting this to be Florence the Nightingale! Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Watt Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 10:43 PM
I feel like I was in Florence... now I want to visit! Loved your narrative, your love for the city really shines through.
Calasibetta Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 12:15 PM
I hope you get to visit~it is my favorite city that I go back to every chance I get. I feel like I am home there, in the splendor of antiquity where every day is a new adventure. Thanks for stopping by to comment~glad I was able to give you a taste of Florence. :)Paulette
Baker Avatar
May 12, 2022 at 5:14 PM
Exquisite imagery and descriptions, Paulette. Your poetry is eloquently written. Have a great week my friend, Bill
Calasibetta Avatar
May 13, 2022 at 6:48 AM
Thanks for your 'eloquent' comment~I love Florence and have so much to say but the confines of the form kept me in check, otherwise I would have a very long narrative. :)Paulette
Poet Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 10:01 AM
Paulette, you have written a beautiful poem. Your use of metaphors and vernacular brings even more magic to this great piece of writing. Warmest wishes for success in the contest.
Calasibetta Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 1:41 PM
Thank you for stopping by to view The Ode to Florence.... so glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette
M  Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 7:22 AM
Paulette a wonderful poem ….you took me there and I wanted to stay! Debx
Calasibetta Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 1:40 PM
Thank you Deb~glad I could take you there. :)Paulette
Buhagiar Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 10:23 PM
Superb poem on one of my favorite cities. I've been to Florence (Firenza) several times. Best for a win.
Calasibetta Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 5:06 AM
Thank you Victor~yes, I live in the US put my heart lives in Florence. I have been there several times, and I long to return. Have a great day! :)Paulette
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