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For Jay Narain's admire a summer flower poetry contest

 

An ode to Dahlia

Oh my enchantress dahlia, an inspiration to my muse.
I remember, meticulously planting your bulbs,
so you would bloom in an abundance of colours.

I watched your emerald stalk blossom slowly,
until your sepal gave birth to elegant petals.
Dawn's fresh sun rays glowed to embellish
your myriad tones, glittering with dewdrops.

You flourished in shades of burgundy and ivory,
scarlet with hues of golden saffron and
in tones of amaranth and amethyst.
Your velvet skin so soft and subtle,
seduced bees and butterflies to savour your nectar.

From all the flowers that blessed my oasis,
you were my queen, so gracefully grandeur,
flourishing around my verdant lawn.

How I missed you when Autumn arrived.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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George Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 6:23 AM
She's beautiful, so elegant she fuels your inspiration and we like that about her. Nice piece. Congratulations Silent.
Slaughter Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 8:58 AM
Beautiful, S O. I admire anyone who can grow anything. And I echo Sam's congrats re the contest.
Kauffman Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 11:48 AM
Hi SO! Congratulations on your win in Jay's contest. I remember my grandmother's dahlias. Your imagery is lyrical "gracefully grandeur," "velvet skin," "enchantress." And I love the way you blend your experience as a gardener plant bulbs with the sense of time passing from spring rebirth, summer maturity to autumn hibernation. You so beautifully express your personal experience. Beautiful word choices of tribute. Sending you blessings as you look forward to your floral harvest!
Kendrick Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 3:24 PM
Beautiful choices of species of the dahlia. I can imagine that you do enjoy them. Do you have to dig them up in the fall and store them inside where there is no danger of them freezing? Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
White Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 11:21 AM
I love Dahlias and pansies. How sweet the pansies smell. Articulated poem of excellence, Kelli
Goldsmith Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 10:24 AM
Back with Congratulation on your win. I enjoyed reading your beautiful write for the beautiful "Dahila" flower again. You are blessed to have a pretty garden of flowers. Enjoy Them.... Have A Blessed Day Writing Away............
Narain Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 9:39 AM
Thanks for listing your nice poem in my sponsored contest. Congratulations.
George Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 5:12 AM
Congratulations Silent One on your win.
May Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 5:36 AM
Wonderful Ode to the Dahlia, Silent, best wishes
Rolland Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 11:25 PM
so beautiful poem, un régal pour l'oeil et l'ouie, my best to you, poet
Gentile Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 7:57 AM
Silent One, your "Queen" is indeed worthy of your beautifully crafted poetic portrait! Your lines are always inspiring to me! Bees and Butterflies are not the only ones seduced!! Happy Tuesday!
George Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 2:21 AM
Dahlias are of different shades and shapes. They are so beautiful and add to the elegance of a garden. The first one in the picture is indeed a rare variety. Dahlias bloom in summer and by winter, they will be totally invisible. "Dawn's fresh sun rays glowed to embellish. your myriad tones, glittering with dewdrops." Love these lines. I can visualize the fringes of the petals beaded with glittering dew drops. A lovely entry for the contest. All the Best dear Silent One.
Nicole Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 6:11 PM
' Your velvet skin so soft and subtle,' and ' your sepal gave birth to elegant petals. ' This is beautiful and romantic, with a hint of passion. Your thoughts caress the page with elegance and grace. Simply breathtaking, Silent One. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Hind Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 10:52 AM
The dahlia is beautiful- and your words, too... your poem took more in than bees and butterflies, :)
Bell Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 9:00 AM
Don't know what flowers do in my garden, but they don't seem to hang around very long.
Empress Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 7:20 AM
I envy dahlias that have no thorns, and are vibrantly flourishing in gardens such as yours, as im a mere black rose, with thorns thicker than needles! Beautiful poem so well woven and depicts the beauty and the alluring nature of this flower with excellent diction! I love the flow of this and your imagery. Especially love the way youve used alliterations in such a seamless manner! Whatever you write is a poem worthy of all the accolades! Pleasure reading your work! Best wishes for the contest
Pandit Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 6:12 AM
A beautiful ode to a beautiful flower, SO. Much enjoyed.
Iqbal Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 5:29 AM
The way you use elements of nature in your poetry is just so beautiful, my dear brother... feels so good to be reading your poetry again. I missed reading it!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 10:43 PM
Loved your poem and I love dahlias. You can have them in winter if you have a heated greenhouse.
Rose  Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 6:30 PM
I so love a man who can appreciate a garden and its amazing flowers, thanks for sharing this S, :)
Poet Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 6:04 PM
Dear SO, wonderful poetry expressing the adoration and affection for a particular dahlia blossom that you have cared for and saw blossom. The significance, grace, and beauty of this one flower in the speaker's garden—your thoughts about it were crystal clear. You describe the dahlia's blossoming process in great detail using colorful and evocative language. Lovely and captivating, words like "enchantress," "emerald stalk," "elegant petals," "myriad tones," and "velvet skin" come to mind. Writing sensory imagery, like "glittering with dewdrops," is another way you engage the reader's senses.
Woods Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 3:55 PM
Spectacular! I loved the choices you made with spelling and adjectives. I felt I could almost smell the scent of the colors you described so gracefully. A hide away full of bloom and nature's little helpers. The last line was wistful. Xo
Beaufort Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 2:56 PM
SO, the anticipation, enjoyment, and lament are parts of things we all experience in our interactions with cyclic items. We're watching a lot of things happening this spring and focusing on enjoying it while it lasts!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 2:34 PM
Loved reading of those lovely shades! Blessings, dear Silent!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 12:01 PM
I enjoyed reading your beautiful write for a beautiful flower, the Dahlia. What great/pretty pictures.... Yes, Autumn comes with many flowers leaving us until the next year. "Good Luck" Have A Blessed Day Writing Away.........
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