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An Ode To a Young Lady

As a youth of fourteen, I saw you first, With silky hair waving, waving along the cheecks, You nodded, talked, moving hands, trod, I could not hear, but lovely lips played. Fancy I more, and more lose sense, What charm, what beauty, what power you possess! This sight I sought whenever I drearmed, Nothing I want, if i see you once again. Alas! What I call the destiney, that takes you far away? The void feels ghastly, and mush is in tumult; Wherupon I seek u? Whereupon I perch? Loneliness my destiney, I am robbed of the rest, How long I live alone? How long tolerate? Let me go unconscious, let me annihilate . Hashim.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/18/2013 11:04:00 AM
Hashim, there is a fluency at the begining but in the middle and at the end you have lost the rhyme.Keep Up .Good Job
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Date: 4/17/2013 9:33:00 PM
Hashim, a very moving poem. sad to seek out. Thank you for stopping by my poem and the soup mail, It has been an honor reading your poems tonight. LUV ~*~SKAT
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Hashim Nizamani
Date: 4/28/2013 10:16:00 AM
Thank you SKAT.
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Hashim Nizamani
Date: 4/17/2013 11:16:00 PM
I am very happy to see such a warming welcome. Thank you very much dear Skat.
Date: 4/16/2013 5:27:00 AM
Ah a lovely poem recollection! So nice to read. Do read mine too pls and coment.
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