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An Involuntary Shudder

VII. An involuntary shudder as I watch her Spread Softening butter over a sliced scone; Much exaggerated flourishing whilst Wielding the ornately designed, silver-plated Table knife. On observing, I am firmly convinced even Stern Hades, Slinking somewhere deep in the Abomination's of his fearful afterlife, Admidst the terror sunken beneath all of, What was, once, vibrant Cyclades, Would, on viewing, blanch with more than Just a modicum of alarmed apprehension; Even more so than his inner, dread Thoughts of which are not well known:- The failed abduction of an unloving and Reluctant wife... But then rash Theseus always did have A keen eye for the young ladies. Maybe the truth really is you never did Have much of a chance after all? Cursed, right off, from the very start. The self-perpetuating lie, in all its Appealing vulnerability, insidiously Fashioned into what most wrongly envisage; They used to say it wore down the heels Under ten million sandals. Oh! how I detest all of what pertains in The unseen flaws of your idolatrous image:- That which reduced all the civilized world To naught but a chaotic shambles! And...at the onset of this monumental Furore:- One dissatisfied spirit who would Dispassionately chart, Complete with scowl, sneer and wry Grimace, A path for destruction to follow on. For, did you not always openly rejoice in All the details of outrageous scandals? Taking the door, reemerging into the Bustling street; I note how poignant it is that the Cherry blossoms have all but blown. These fragile little petals, lying idly Scattered over warming pavements, Prompting comparisons with those long ago Flowering Almonds; Recalling the flaring of nostrils assailed By a bitter fragrance That pervaded throughout wide avenues... Drenched the cool, sheltering gardens; Sacred blossoms, crushed and stuck to The underside of our calloused feet. But, ahhh, now it would seem we have Both outgrown, What, once - was the whole world! Although, unlike you, despite our separated Imposition of shared estrangements, I still passionately yearn for blackening Olives, the ripening ears of the golden, Shimmering croplands.

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Date: 7/21/2019 9:59:00 PM
Ahhh John I could read your work over and over but you know me lol I love it better when you read it to me!;) All my affection!;)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/11/2019 11:56:00 AM
Ah my dear kind sir I will hold you to that!;)
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John Fleming
Date: 7/24/2019 7:23:00 AM
Thank you my loyal and much valued supporter -- you are much appreciated!! With fondest affection as ever. :) john P.s I am sure I can always find time to read to you Brenda. :)
Date: 1/17/2019 4:17:00 PM
I'm ashamed that I do not manage to visit your poems more often, John. You are one of the few who can write long poems and with ease manage to keep my attention. There is no mistaking your style, reminding me of a spider weaving an intricate web which slowly takes shape until the end result is deserving of applause. ~ Best regards // paul
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John Fleming
Date: 1/23/2019 7:53:00 AM
Hello, Paul; sorry for the late reply...I thought I had already replied. I am, as ever, most grateful to you when taking the time to both visit and comment...you have always been kind and generous in your encouraging remarks towards my poetry -- many thanks, Paul!! My very warmest wishes. :) john
Date: 1/9/2019 2:07:00 PM
Hello John Fleming, I just finished reading your poem. I like this poem you created. have a nice day my friend.
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John Fleming
Date: 1/11/2019 8:41:00 AM
Hello, Darlene. Many thanks for your taking the time to visit...and of course for your kind comments - very much appreciated! :) john
Date: 1/2/2019 6:53:00 AM
This is wonderful, John, rife with ambiguity and allusion, with just the right amount of crimped edges to keep the wheels turning. Sublime phrasing and copious amounts of fresh imagery! John H suggested I give you a read, and I will have to thank him. I am but a "newbie" and a hack, but I like to fool myself into thinking I can spot a golden aria or two, and this is just such a dove. Keep up the great work - I will have to return soon. Blessings! :-)
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John Fleming
Date: 1/3/2019 6:24:00 AM
Gregory, allow me to say it is a great pleasure to make your acquaintance...very nice to know you. :) Much obliged for taking the time, at John's kind suggestion, to visit and comment, I can assure you -- it is always appreciated! Many thanks! :) john
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/2/2019 6:55:00 AM
Oh ... and into the favs it goes!
Date: 12/31/2018 10:44:00 AM
John,John,John, what can I say, there is no-one on this site that writes as you do! I've been waiting to read another diamond write from you and you delivered in a big way. How do you do it? You start off describing buttering a scone and then disappear into brilliance, and then end up with olives....what a mind!! An obvious fave!!
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John Fleming
Date: 1/1/2019 8:10:00 AM
John, firstly, you are as welcome here as anyone I do sincerely assure you; secondly -- many, many thanks!! You have always accorded me the most gracious of comments...I am deeply indebted. My very warmest regards as always! Your friend. :) john. P.s I will be visiting your little corner of the "Soup" very soon - cheers!

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