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An Imponderable

I had a little friend who left too soon. Acute leukemia struck at age five. His mind was so blindingly bright. This earth could not give it room. He had questions in endless supply. Every answer quickened another query About stars, earthworms, seasons. Even some adults struggled to reply. In that era nothing could be done. He was hospitalized for passive care. I visited him one bleak, broken day. His mother was sobbing for her son. Losing a child—name a thing as bad. I cannot conceive the anguish of it. I cannot harbor a hurt so severe. Years later grief drove the father mad. And if perchance I meet the mother A decade beyond her child’s death. Seeing me opens an unhealed wound And she tries fresh tears to smother. His name was Brent, I see him yet Dressed in all white in his casket. I wonder at the why of his passing. I wonder if God should a child forget.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/17/2015 9:18:00 PM
G'day Paul... a very sad story that you have presented well. Our family went through something similar with my nephew many years ago now, but I can never forget that nine months - catch you Paul - Lindsay
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 7/17/2015 11:04:00 PM
Thank you, Lindsay, for commenting. I'm sorry your family had to endure a similar experience. Some people have no need to be sent to hell; they have already experienced it in mortality.
Date: 7/17/2015 4:07:00 PM
A very sad tale...It just ripped the family apart...I can't imagine the pain.
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 7/17/2015 5:59:00 PM
Thanks for commenting, Tim. It's the kind of story/poem one can write without using a lot of adjectives. The gravity of the event thrives on strong nouns. (Forgive me, here I am instructing you, which is the last thing you need.)
Date: 7/17/2015 2:14:00 PM
simply heartbreaking Paul I can think of nothing worse than losing a child and the pain of the mother must have been intensified with the tragic death of her husband :-( hugs Jan xx
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 7/17/2015 6:09:00 PM
Oh, Jan, you insightfully cut to the quick in comment after comment and in magnificent poem after magnificent poem. Please know of my gratitude. Hugs always.

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