An Iffy Thing

Vision’s clearly an iffy thing In some it blurs, others' ~ takes wing

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/29/2024 8:45:00 PM

an iffy thing…watch out for things on earth and in the sky above

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 11/29/2024 8:31:00 PM

Iffy can mean things are not plain to see. But GW's couplet is as clear as glass to me. I enjoyed the read, Gershon. Thank-you. Take care, Old duck.

Karen Jones

Date: 11/29/2024 8:28:00 PM

Well they say beauty is in the eye of the beholder right? Yet this makes me ponder the eyesight of the beholder lol. I’m near sighted myself.

Michael Tor

Date: 11/29/2024 12:59:00 PM

Nice thought and vision in writing this one Gershon. Lately my vision has been blurred do to an excessive amount of Melatonin I have taken in from eating too much Turkey. Hopefully it will go back to normal after a few days. lol. Your recovering friend...

John Read

Date: 11/29/2024 8:57:00 AM

Hi Gershon this sounds a little iffy to me.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/29/2024 2:08:00 AM

So true Gershon. Tom