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An Honorable Secret

i love you with eye's that you cannot see with lips that cannot speek it's hearts desire with a poem that i dare not write and a song that i cannot sing i love you with hands that do not touch a voice that will not tell how much a presence so unworthy and yet it seems it is for you i live day and night i keep you in sight for you are in my minds eye and your beauty it requites all the loyalty of my time but by your mate is where you belong you with me is something wrong an oath to them has been sworn yet to me , you are my adorn

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Date: 7/22/2012 8:21:00 PM
I hope it complements yours in a way.
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Date: 7/22/2012 10:17:00 AM
A facinating write... A work well done. It shows a heart wide open with unrequited love... Well done my friend.
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Date: 7/22/2012 8:23:00 PM
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Date: 7/16/2012 7:12:00 PM
A loved one so near, yet so far away... nicely rhymed with a pleasing flow. Well done, my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 7/15/2012 8:21:00 AM
I feel your burning pain my friend...one has to live with a love that is unforbidden, makes one go crazy for more of that love. I know too well. Sweet write! Thanks for reading and for the comments. Keep it flowing my friend! Joy wells
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Date: 7/12/2012 4:35:00 PM
great write Situation
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Date: 7/10/2012 4:16:00 PM
sweet situation controlling the secret situation...
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Date: 7/6/2012 9:10:00 PM
Thought provoking. I really enjoyed your write! It takes courage to admit.. and thank you for visiting my page. Much love.
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Date: 7/6/2012 8:43:00 PM
T S., this is amazing.. to have such beauty in your eyes... awee... mates smates... lol... enjoyed...pd
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Date: 7/4/2012 7:51:00 PM
Soupmail
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Date: 7/1/2012 5:54:00 AM
Unrequited masterpiece, Situation! Jimbo
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Date: 6/30/2012 8:54:00 PM
I hope you find a love that can be honorably proclaimed. Thank you for commenting on my "heartrbroken" poem. It was all very true. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/29/2012 7:08:00 PM
great write,Situation
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Date: 6/28/2012 3:22:00 PM
Some secrets are better kept, if they would be harmful. Better yet is to forget and not have secrets. Good to read your poem today, as it made me think.
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Date: 6/28/2012 9:11:00 PM
and this is the correct way of interpeting this poem.
Date: 6/28/2012 10:49:00 AM
Forbidden fruit is always the most tempting but sweet as it is there is always a high price. Best to seek your love elsewhere. Good verse here. Some typos but nothing too serious. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/27/2012 6:25:00 PM
Love finds a way whether in person or not. Just needs to find that special person you are describing here. Love those last 4 words, such a nice way to say it. Luv, Lizabeth
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Date: 6/27/2012 6:08:00 AM
I am happy to find poets when they comment on mine, poems that is... Thank you so much. Doctors, Yes! one said to me "No one will ever have him." Small consolation. I did my best. Nola
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Date: 6/26/2012 7:31:00 PM
aww. its not Sunday, but I couldn't resist this sweet poem. So what's the secret? lol (he did not converse with me, guess it is all in the hands of Our Heavenly Father huh? I have a friend in trust. I trust with my life. ~I just have so much love inside of me for many people, I am happy John. Bye for now, Cindy
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