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An Eye Opener

Everything at the top I find is fabricated nonsense 
truth is security lies as they are blind rats 
to home truths and openly sources spill the beans
 
A fish out of water plops 
Spiraling circles around what they say within government 
gasping full of rubbish reeks in order to control media 

Everyone right to the top brass with twisted agendas
is brainwashing people in utter garbage driven by their thirty pieces 
dressed in their cheap perfumed words stink to the high heavens 

When they come to the gates of two truths all seeing 
then they will see the deceiver kneel 
before the master creator of us all
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Bateman Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 6:56 AM
Liam, A very interesting take on things with this verse. The Deceiver must submit to the master creator in the end. Superb!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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June 3, 2016 at 8:18 PM
Hi Liam! Wow!This is a most powerful poem,you've penned here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very sad but written so very beautifully with truth n' deep caring, understanding and compassion for human rights.And I agree with you in all you say here.Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.All these bad situations around the world really saddens my heart and soul very much.Thank you so much for caring and writing this very excellent,beautiful, great piece here,Liam.A true glowing golden gem!Just awesome!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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