An Eye Opener

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unrhymed tercets

Everything at the top I find is fabricated nonsense truth is security lies as they are blind rats to home truths and openly sources spill the beans A fish out of water plops Spiraling circles around what they say within government gasping full of rubbish reeks in order to control media Everyone right to the top brass with twisted agendas is brainwashing people in utter garbage driven by their thirty pieces dressed in their cheap perfumed words stink to the high heavens When they come to the gates of two truths all seeing then they will see the deceiver kneel before the master creator of us all

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Gary Bateman

Date: 6/5/2016 6:56:00 AM

Liam, A very interesting take on things with this verse. The Deceiver must submit to the master creator in the end. Superb!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/3/2016 8:18:00 PM

Hi Liam! Wow!This is a most powerful poem,you've penned here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very sad but written so very beautifully with truth n' deep caring, understanding and compassion for human rights.And I agree with you in all you say here.Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.All these bad situations around the world really saddens my heart and soul very much.Thank you so much for caring and writing this very excellent,beautiful, great piece here,Liam.A true glowing golden gem!Just awesome!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^