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An Explanation

Appearing suddenly and with haste, Holding nothing but a dagger, She cut open my throat. Like a jilted mistress, naked under the moon, She carved runes under my tongue, Tore my mouth apart And bled things previously unheard. Breath came, In the form of a warrior woman with battle scars, Skin ragged and withered Feet firm upon the ground. Encased in mud, The iron on her skin whiffed foul and sweet, Like truth. She hummed. Loudly, She clicked her tongue at me And in her vision, Poured breath into my mouth. I drank it in and shared it out. It was much too soon upon your chest So you heaved and moved away, Filled only with the sound of death.

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Date: 4/21/2024 5:12:00 AM
Huh... that one needs to be meditated on I think... super interesting! The more I read it, the more I get. Lovely!
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Date: 1/28/2024 4:34:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/26/2024 2:05:00 PM
Great first post..Welcome to poetry soup..
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