Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Limerick

An Expert Climber

There was this man, an expert climber
Followed own technique of old timer
It was always his call
Wife wasn’t happy at all
For he would never care to time her.

He decided to go off the track
Flexing his body on vale and crack
Pleased with the thrilling ride 
Wife lost her words to chide
But he slipped on the sweat, broke his back.

April 26, 2020
Syllable count : 9/9/6/6/9
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Rhyme checked on rhymeZone.com
Contest : Limerick
Sponsor : Janice Canerdy

September 1, 2020
Contest : Living It Up For Laughter
Sponsor : Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Andrea Dietrich May 8, 2020 at 9:33 PM way to go, Subimal. Congrats on your win.

Mohan Chutani May 8, 2020 at 7:29 PM Subimal, an overconfidant expert well exposed. Congrats

Jan Allison May 8, 2020 at 2:53 PM Ouch! not so expert after all Subimal! many congrats on your win:-)hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy May 8, 2020 at 1:18 PM Thank you for entering your great poem my contest, and CONGRATULATIONS on your win, Subimal! Janice