An Existential Curiosity

This cosmos, indisputably is a sheer wonder We cannot but bow before its grandeur To what strange terrains it does open its doors And what secrets are hidden beneath the stars Man has ever been impelled by an existential curiosity To probe into its mysteries, struck by its grandiosity Many theories have evolved about its nature and birth Scientific truths and assumptions are never in dearth Some assume that from the merciless emptiness sans light, From the deep silence of the horrendous night, Universe emerged with the bang of hammers On the anvils of eons thundering like firecrackers There arose abruptly a gas cloud burst of inexorable force And life emerged from stardust, our energy source. While this is what the exponents of Big Bang assert, Life, from a cosmic egg was hatched, some others purport No doubt, this universe is an infinite stretch of lattice Woven in the loom through billions of years by gratis As the wheels turned and as the fires burned Through cosmic vapor the first atom was churned Thus, over the eons, life here has flourished And with man’s wisdom and efforts it got nourished! Galaxies are scattered in infinite space And our planet Earth is well balanced in place After the day’s vigil, when the mighty sun sets The moon and the stars take over on their night shifts Multitudinous stars glitter and twinkle, a wondrous sight As branching chandeliers shedding luminous light Sure, some extra-terrestrial hand has set the Earth in tune And everything needed to hold life is benevolently strewn Just as this universe was born, it would one day die With all the planets, stars, and starlets of the sky Who can predict how it is going to end With a bang or whimper, or is the end impend? Man’s existential curiosity continues to make him ponder And he stands totally aghast in endless wonder! Dec.26.2022 ~ Placed First~ Pick This or That Poetry Contest Sponsor- Edward Ibeh

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Date: 1/19/2023 3:09:00 PM
Your outstanding talent always shines my dear friend Valsa. I love and enjoyed every line of your poem on your existential curiosity. Congratulations on your well-deserved first place win and this outstanding poem, a masterpiece. Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 1/18/2023 3:28:00 PM
Gorgeous penning, as always, Valsa:-) Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Date: 1/18/2023 9:21:00 PM
Thank you so much Edward. I feel thrilled in taking part in your contest. Always I get inspired to pen poems on subjects you provide. Fortunately I have been a winner in all contests. Thanks a lot for the great opportunity you provide, dear poet friend.
Date: 1/18/2023 6:50:00 AM
Valsa! Back with Congratulations on winning first place in the contest! Owing to this simply breathtaking poetry.
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Date: 12/26/2022 7:01:00 PM
I enjoy your musings on the origins of existence, Valsa... Now, I've always felt that the Big Fellow Up There invented bowling, only He used giant sworls of universe-type matter. And so, He rolled one giant 'STRIKE' and "KABOOM," we have ourselves a Universe! ~ Just following the science, you know. lol.
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Date: 12/26/2022 10:05:00 AM
Deep poetry, Valsa. You throw yourself wholly into your poetry. I hope you had a wonderful Dec. 25.
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Date: 1/1/2023 6:13:00 AM
Thanks a lot Andrea. By nature, I am a perfectionist. Though my talents are just average, I put sincere effort to do things as best as I can.
Date: 12/26/2022 6:30:00 AM
Valsa, your poetry is very well written, and it provokes a lot of thought. We frequently ponder whether or not a man's insatiable curiosity to learn more about the world around him would ultimately prove to be his undoing. Without human inquisitiveness, it's difficult to conceive of what the world might be like. This beautiful poem comes to a close with a stanza that brilliantly captures the essence of your muse. Top placement for this gem.
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Date: 12/26/2022 8:16:00 AM
Yes, it is human inquisitiveness that has worked as the major propelling force behind all developments. Your generous comments make me more confident and I am so thankful to you. Reading your comment, I feel flattered!
Date: 12/26/2022 6:08:00 AM
But for human curiosity where would the world be--insightful depiction, Valsa. Hope the forces stay in balance forever, so we don't crash and burn.
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Date: 12/26/2022 8:12:00 AM
Only because of man's curiosity, all the major developments in all spheres have occurred. Let us all hope that everything will remain in place in future too. Thanks a lot Vijay for your encouraging comment.
Date: 12/26/2022 4:16:00 AM
Always the big questions, Valsa: Very well composed, Your curiosity is in fine form. SuZ
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Date: 12/26/2022 8:08:00 AM
Thank you Suzanne. From time immemorial man has been searching after the wonders of the universe.
Date: 12/26/2022 3:36:00 AM
Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 12/26/2022 8:07:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear Sara !
Date: 12/26/2022 1:11:00 AM
A very thought provoking verse Valsa, I often wonder if man's quest to discover the unknown will bring about his downfall. Many discoveries benefit mankind while others have the potential to destroy us. Best of luck Tom
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Date: 12/26/2022 8:06:00 AM
Curiosity is behind all great discoveries. But it can kill the cat too! Glad you liked my poem. Your opinion counts much to me. Thanks a lot Tom.
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