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An Existential Curiosity

unacknowledged as he died ~ the solipsist told himself no more lies

in the end all the love i gave ~ will equal that of an unmarked grave 


This or That, Vol 15 Poetry Contest
An Existential Curiosity
2x17 Howmanysyllables 
12/20/22

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Robert Gorelick Date: 12/27/2022 4:42:00 PM Jean Paul Sartre couldn't have said it better! Happy Holidays! Robert Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 12/28/2022 9:41:00 AM The great philosopher I’m sure he would pass a wandering eye over my Monoku lol, thank you so much for stopping by Robert, cheers David

I Am Anaya Date: 12/26/2022 4:51:00 PM A kind of miser, he needs no one and is not needed. But sometimes you have to make these things happen or try a last time. I have a good example of that. It's about siblings that hadn't talked for decades, inside they really did want to. "To the own self be true and let the chips fall where they may!" Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 12/27/2022 5:15:00 AM Heya Anaya, oh much worse than a miser, uses others as doormats and tools rather than equal human beings, I agree this often happens with families too, in the end the solipsist is simply treated with the same contempt they treated others with, and dies alone, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith Date: 12/20/2022 11:06:00 AM A wonderful write. If people are kind, then no saying, I am sorry on their death bed. Toooooo late then. Have a blessed day............. Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 12/20/2022 12:06:00 PM Really is Paula too late in the day, a real curiosity of mankind, thanks so much for stopping by, cheers David

Tom Cunningham Date: 12/20/2022 4:17:00 AM Don't think his grave will have many flowers, in time when people mention him, other's will say who?. Some people are so far up their own backsides and care for no one but themselves. I avoid them like the plague. Tom Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 12/20/2022 4:45:00 AM Indeed Tom, but why do some people wait til on their deathbed, to finally concede they were wrong about others deserving to be recognised as equals, thanks for stopping by, cheers David