An Excuse For a Suicide

The blood that remembers
That of brother-to-brother or sister-to-sister 
The blood that holds a family together
The blood that brought us here from a far and distant land
The blood we share in toil and strife and in war and death
Who made this blood and why do we have so little of it?  
Shouldn’t we be able to farm it and grow it like tomatoes on the vine?
For it is our blood.  We own it.  Who can take it from us?
War, most certainly, but that blood is given for righteousness and should surely be returned post haste.
Can we cut ourselves like the Indians and become blood brothers? Does that strengthen our numbers?  Or is it just some silly myth or rite of life.  
I would like to think that blood would give strength but as it pours from my body I only feel weakness.
These two slits in my wrists are conduits to another world right?
They will make strong and give a warrior the strength to shoot the arrow straight and ride the pony hard.  
My giving is their strength.  It is a good day to die.  
I bleed myself slowly for I know that they will need the energy in increments.  My soul is that of a warrior and it can only strengthen their cause.
From Wounded Knee to DaNang the dead have given their souls so we could be free.
Why would I stop that tradition now?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Duncan Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 6:43 PM
I do like the way you write ;}
Kilmer Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 6:46 PM
Not eveyones cup of tea. But I appreciate the compliment. As I tell other people I am a work in progress... :) Kilmer
Anglesey Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 6:46 PM
WOW... this gave me chills. Very moving and cryptic at the same time.
Anglesey Avatar
July 29, 2013 at 11:02 AM
I am intrigued by your bold use of symbolism that give your themes many layered twists and turns. The dark subject becomes enlightened by making it seem okay (comparing it to the blood-brother rituals), etc. It's quite effective. I hope it brings a peaceful release. Nothing to be sorry for ...
Kilmer Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 6:51 PM
Karen, thanks for taking the time to read my work. Sorry about being so dark. It's just my nature, but I am working on it. Kilmer
Gabriella Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 5:27 PM
Sweet Worf reference. :)
Kilmer Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 5:57 PM
Thanks April. Your soul is kind. And your words make me happy. SRK
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