Notes About The Poem

An Exciting Encounter

a walk in the wind
in the fresh, fragrant season
vivifying breaths

a walk in wildness
sunlit hair is in my eyes
disorderly blooms

a walk in chaos
that keeps the pinwheels turning
as wind tours my street
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 8:53 PM
So fresh and refreshing are your haikus, Evelyn. Keep those pinwheels turning! Smiling away, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 10:22 PM
Many thanks. It's nice to read your positive comments, Gershon. Keep smiling! :)
Kendrick Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 2:25 PM
Creative lines penned in this one. I hope you remained safe in spite of the wind. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Buehler Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 3:43 PM
Thank you very much for your kind thoughts, Sara. :)
Poet Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 6:48 AM
An introduction to the season of winter, Evelyn. Already, we can feel the chill. Wonderful detail in the settings you describe.
Buehler Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 8:51 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed them. Thank you. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 5:54 AM
Love it all especially second verse! Nice, Evelyn!
Buehler Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 8:49 AM
Thank you very much, Kim. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 12:15 AM
A passage to winter. We are already shivering. Lovely descriptive scenes.
Buehler Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 8:49 AM
Your comments are so much appreciated. :)
Conn Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 8:51 PM
Nice.
Buehler Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 9:02 PM
Thank you so much. :)
DiMino Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 6:15 PM
Lovely walk! I was there every step. Thank you for sharing.
Buehler Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 9:01 PM
You're very welcome, Joe. Thank you for the smiles. :)
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