An Excavation

As one gets older some look back,
                                   
some want to see what they did right and wrong.
             
Some call this their memoirs,
                                         
a life of their many memories.
                                       
Maybe an excavation on life is what we needed,
               
look deep into the many years gone by.
                           
Found what we did right,
                                               
now how can we copy it.
                                             
Found what we did wrong,
                               
now set it a side.
                                                         
When a deep life excavation is done,
                               
what will we find.
                                                           
Write it all down both right and wrong,
                           
pass it on to the younger ones.
                                       
Many years ago the younger ones learned,
                     
they learned from the older ones in the family.
                 
Maybe we need to turn the hands on the clock back,
         
to old practices of learning from the older family members.
             
Today the younger ones seem to be lost,
                          
so lost in this crazy world we live in.
                                
If we did an excavation on our lives,
                                
what mysteries would we find.
                                        
Maybe we can save a younger life,
                                  
maybe make our life more meaningful in return.
  
Date Written: 6/21/2019
    
4 Place
Title: An Excavation
                                                     
This or That, Vol 4 Poetry Contest
                                  
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
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Faulkner Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 7:55 AM
Congratulations on your win, Paula~
Goldsmith Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 12:48 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day.................
Poet Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 12:36 PM
Congratulations, Paula, you deserve this win with this wonderful poem. Blessings and best regards
Goldsmith Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 12:46 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this Excavation write. Have a blessed day.................
Alex Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 10:31 PM
A beautiful Creation. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 8:10 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day.................
Neumann Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 2:47 AM
Very fine poem. Have you written your memoirs? Kind wishes, Kai
Goldsmith Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 1:43 PM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this excavation write. I have not written my memories. Maybe I should start it. Have a blessed day................
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 12:38 PM
Heya Paula, you done a fine excavation with your muse on this poem, I agree the world is a crazy place, and with today’s technology it’s in our face everyday, and if indeed there are skeletons in our closet, might be a good time to clear them out, cheers David
Goldsmith Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 11:48 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like this write on "An Excavation." Have a blessed day................
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 12:37 PM
wow what a wonderful way to do that theme. So well done, paula
Goldsmith Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 11:47 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like my excavation. Have a blessed day................
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