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An Everlasting Legacy

Doom smiles at us all, so we smile back. Wilted petals on the Tree of Life don't die. A most modest craftsman or a devil's eye. All will perish one day on the one-way track. Drain the grime off your toes; nothing lack. Yet it may be apart above and beyond the eye. Death burns as a candle; light has gone awry. Gowns were thorny throughout the stack. Wrapped in tears interwoven inside a sigh. You will never feel agony as you rise above. Grief isn't disarray; grieving is the only cure. A solid and lasting trail of rays in the sky. Restore the broken visions as a wing dove That proves we're ill, and alas, "Are we sure?"
Written: May 23, 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Baker Avatar
May 24, 2023 at 3:43 PM
Your words resinate with my soul, dear friend. It's like your soul is overflowing and you poems appear. Thanks for sharing your thoughts of wisdom. What else can I say except, I love a good sonnet! Have a great week! Bill
Hind Avatar
May 24, 2023 at 12:56 PM
Deep message and images... I really enjoyed reading it.
Andresen Avatar
May 24, 2023 at 12:13 PM
- "Wrapped in tears interwoven inside a sigh ... Grief isn't disarray; grieving is the only cure" ... beautifully written in words of truth, Las :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
May 24, 2023 at 5:52 AM
Death burns as a candle; light has gone awry--we will all pass through eventually---your poem is deep in thoughts.
Kendrick Avatar
May 24, 2023 at 4:49 AM
I've noticed that you have written several of these sonnets. It must be a form you enjoy using. Creative work you have written. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Poet Avatar
May 24, 2023 at 7:29 AM
Sara, I appreciate you taking the time to read and provide feedback. This is my first attempt at an Italian sonnet, and I'm glad you enjoy it.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 24, 2023 at 2:18 AM
We are all sufferers of some illness. But we plod on.
May Avatar
May 23, 2023 at 7:53 PM
"Restoring broken visions when things go awy, Very nicely penned Sotto
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