An Evening With, Dinner and a Dance

Their evening starts
With dinner and a dance
It's taken many months
To be standing in this stance
 
Slow delightful moves
As they move around the floor
In their hearts they know
Their evening cries for more
 
The moment moves their wants
As they share thoughts with a kiss
The texture of their touch
From their earlier evening wish
 
Now their dance is over
They sit and drink some wine
And share chats and kisses
Captured in their time
 
Moving close together
His hands start to walk
Like an adventurer on her body
As their gentle kissing locks
 
At each and every button
He opens, she heavenly sighs
Revealing this lovely dove
She's only for his eyes
 
Her blouse now ajar
His breath, she takes away
Her tanned delightful cleavage
Invites his hands to play
 
Gentle as can be
He glides to feel her charms
Excitement shows through
As she holds him in her arms
 
His hands re-adventure
Her torso he slowly crawls
To reach his destination
Her heavenly scented walls
 
He zigs her inner thighs
Like meandering river flows
For he knows up ahead
In her garden lies a rose
 
Minutes pass with kisses
Complimenting with passionate touch
Her garden he has reached
Allowing, she loves him such
 
Her rose, with petal like frills
Moist in the evening dew
Her garden gate he enters
She sighs, as she welcomes him through
 
The walk he takes so slowly
As he absorbs her inner walls
Upon seeing her heart
He's running ten feet tall
 
The excitement in their hearts
Is released and begins to flow
A rush of groans and sighs
All over their bodies, show
 
Breathing peaks with kisses
As they hold each other tight
The Highlander and his Dove
Declared their love tonight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/27/2009 10:59:00 AM
Romance and love breathes from your pen James so effortlessly bright!
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Date: 7/27/2009 7:21:00 AM
Hey Mr. James: This is a very-long poem but I find it to be longivity in satisfaction and com- mitment. "I like it a lots".
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Date: 7/27/2009 4:30:00 AM
nice write. enjoyed reading it. loved it. always, cherica lynn <3
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Date: 7/26/2009 9:57:00 AM
great declaration of you and your dove's love,first dinner,than dancing,than love,you ve pictured an awesome moment for two people happily in love-beautiful write James-charma
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Date: 7/26/2009 8:59:00 AM
Most scintillating, beautiful, tasteful and delicious, not to mention steamy! I just love those lusty Highlanders! ~Trudy~
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Date: 7/25/2009 5:53:00 PM
This is a good rhyme, with a nice design Your reality becomes fantasy after the fourth stanza. Were they in a bar, club or at home? Bill
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Date: 7/25/2009 10:14:00 AM
Dude, I have poetry that is romantic, tasteful, but maybe a little to tasteless for this site. I believe that our poetry society might get a thrill from them... But The soup may not... Anyways, love is a subject that will never die, Each voice has its own way of describing love, and passion, this my friend is well written, with a capturing structure and rhyme scheme......EXCELLENT........:JP)
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Date: 7/25/2009 6:52:00 AM
Your romantic spirit is so breathtaking, James! I love the way this story unfolds, showing how love is recognized and expressed with great passion. You capture our hearts with this write! Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 7/25/2009 5:07:00 AM
Interesting writing. Very descriptive of your love and passion. Sara
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