An Evening of Regret

There she lay
While a crimson pool around her head
Reaching into the cracks of the blacktop bed 
Still and inaudible
While the her last breathe lingers in the mist
Taken from her mortality
A sad and horrifying reality
He didn’t focus in the moment of rage?
Now mapped out he’s turning another page
If only he had faith in the Lord above 
The angels called on him but he gave them a shove

Trembling and frighten with his actions 
A glitz in the brain with a minor distraction 
His jealousy took a hold 
Now minutes are ticking, and the damage is done 
And he finds himself on the run 
The police enter the scene 
With shock and remorse for Christine 
Just a week before she paid the police a visit 
Asking for help and a restraining order with it 
Miscommunications and untimeliness won
Her husband killed her with a gun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/26/2008 2:55:00 PM
Very deep poem Laura - Jealousy is a disease that eats away at the soul and often destroys lives - One thing I'm thankful for is the fact that when my wife and I quit drugs this awful disease went out the window with them and now our lives are free of it - Very deep and painful poem - God Bless
Login to Reply
Date: 9/26/2008 11:29:00 AM
Absolutely horrible to know this does happen, and too often. So disturbing Laura. Well written. Love, Shar
Login to Reply
Date: 9/25/2008 3:41:00 PM
hi Laura, sad to say that this type of thing happens everyday, I just don't think that the laws for women and children are secure enough, great but sad write, full of passsion, pain, and despair, and thank you for all of your wonderful comments, take care D-nyce
Login to Reply
Date: 9/25/2008 12:40:00 PM
Something we read in the paper every day! Tragic story that happens in every city. Good one, Laura! ~Carrie
Login to Reply
Date: 9/25/2008 11:08:00 AM
that always happens. the police wait until someone is killed then they come out. a great piece you wrote. thank you for reading my poem and for your comment
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad