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An Erased Poem Raised From the Dead. ( For the Duos Contest From James Peranteau and John Loving Iii

Trusting (without doubt or fear) Inverse fine gifts (given to us something dear) Amoraously (with great affection we give.) Ambiguious chatter (sweet nothings whispered in the ear) Ambivalent feelings (our existence as a whole.) Overtly extrude with exuberance (openly pushed feelings explode) What can not contain itself ( the Holy Spirit commands it to shout) in mine mind (in memories stout) I spill on mine poetic slip ( my mind has use for such splinded verse) Mind of gossip (and imagine the best; but tell the worse) [ who will carry this on? i see a family Duo. Kristy and Aleera Walters De La Keur. get busy yal]

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/13/2009 8:26:00 PM

Well done God Bless Phyl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/8/2009 6:46:00 PM

Hey, John, I knew you and James would come up with something great! Love the unique creative form you employed. The dynamic duo lives! Let's see what Kristy and Aleera do! Love you, Carolyn

Frances King

Date: 8/6/2009 1:05:00 AM

This was fun! Well done, chaps! Thanks for your comments on"English Ghost Story" Yes, I told Bill, and he did a deliciously creepy poem called "Coast House". I'm not sure where the game went from there ...

Aleera De La Keur

Date: 7/31/2009 7:23:00 PM

Soup mail

Kristy De La Keur Scoville

Date: 7/31/2009 6:42:00 PM

Had to add a bit to it, check out the revised version, hope you like it.....The Southern Belle Kristy De La Keur

Aleera De La Keur

Date: 7/31/2009 4:09:00 PM

Good write we'll be done with it tonight, is there a theme or can it be any subject? Please let me know....Aleera

James Peranteau

Date: 7/31/2009 3:01:00 PM

Mr. Loving,..so very fine what you have accomplished here ! I'm in total amaze with this poetic write ! You have a heart of gold Sir and an excelent form ! TY for including me in this fine poetic blister of thought ! your friend and fan !! james

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/30/2009 4:33:00 PM

wow-every verse--what a great 2009 mix--excellent you are both of you--i love it -im so proud of your writes my two good poetry friends--well done--charma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/30/2009 4:15:00 PM

Interesting. Sara