Beryl Edmonds Poet Rhyme

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An Endless Dream Dance - Collab With Jo

You dance love, and you dance joy and you dance dreams."- Gene Kelly
I am lost in an endless dream
My love and I are together
Dancing hand in hand, we're a team
Like the zephyr and a feather
Swirling and swaying to the beat
We are caught up in love's sweet trance
To the music, tapping our feet
Adrift in our fantasy dance.

Embraced in splendour of the night
We vowed that we’d twirl evermore
Waltzing the dream till morning light
Upon earth’s grandiose dance floor
Moments too precious to forget
Memories stored safely in heart
To replay in our mind cassette
Forever my cherished sweetheart.

I do not want this dream to end
To wake up and find I’m alone
But dawn breaks in to apprehend
Into the real world, I’m thrown
I await night’s darkness to sleep
To dream of my love and our dance
I am lost in fantasy deep
Hope this will last longer perchance.

Bleak since you left my heart and dreams
In your arms it felt so real
Tears cascade down my face in streams
The heartache I cannot conceal
Come back to me prince entrancing 
We’ll waltz to happiness again
Dreams are for love and romancing
To a melodious refrain.

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7th April 2023


Collab with Jo Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joanna Daniel

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Linda Alice Fowler May 3, 2023 at 6:22 AM Grat collab Belle. Congratulations on your win! :) Beryl Edmonds September 30, 2026 at 7:02 PM Thank you Linda, it was great to collaborate… Beryl

Reason A. Poteet May 2, 2023 at 1:03 PM Fantastic piece on dancing, Belle. You and Jo are definitely on the same page dancing together with your pens in hand. Kudos on a fine winning entry. Beryl Edmonds May 2, 2023 at 5:11 PM Thank you so much for those words Reason, they’re very much appreciated… Belle

Howard Kerr May 2, 2023 at 9:46 AM Hello Belle, A towering masterpiece has been rewarded with an apt placement. Your submission has a graceful sweep and magnificent narrative that ebbs and flows with due elegance. Thanks for your review of my entry and the generous insights. I found them extremely helpful Warm regards Howard Beryl Edmonds May 2, 2023 at 5:07 PM Hello Howard, I’m touched by your delightful review, so kind and encouraging of you. Kindest regards ~ Beryl

Sam Kauffman May 2, 2023 at 9:15 AM Not only is this as lovely and graceful as the "dance," but your collaboration is seamless! So beautifully and artfully done Belle. Congratulations on your win!!! Blessings on your dance steps! Beryl Edmonds May 2, 2023 at 4:57 PM Thank you for those lovely kind words Sam, I truly do appreciate your comments. Blessings, Beryl

Ann Peck May 2, 2023 at 9:11 AM This is such a gorgeous collab! I love it and am faving! :) Congratulations! Beryl Edmonds May 2, 2023 at 4:58 PM Thank you so much Ann, bless you for faving… Beryl :)

Paula Goldsmith May 2, 2023 at 7:15 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write/picture. Love It. Have a blessed day.................. Beryl Edmonds May 2, 2023 at 4:53 PM Thank you Paula, you have a blessed day too… Beryl

Joanna Daniel May 2, 2023 at 1:16 AM This is simply superb, Belle, you took my poem to another level:) and I love that pic:) congratulations on your top win:) enjoyed our collab:) Beryl Edmonds May 2, 2023 at 2:42 AM Thank you so much Joanna, I enjoyed our collab too… Beryl

Linda Alice Fowler April 16, 2023 at 6:04 AM I love dance - I love to dance - I love to watch dance - I love to hear dance. Everything beautiful in this poem collaboration Belle. Best wishes for your win in this contest. :) Beryl Edmonds April 16, 2023 at 7:40 AM Thank you very much Linda, I love dancing too… Beryl :)