An Endless Dream Dance

"You dance love, and you dance joy and you dance dreams." - Gene Kelly I am lost in an endless dream My love and I are together Dancing hand in hand, we're a team Like the zephyr and a feather Swirling and swaying to the beat We are caught up in love's sweet trance To the music, tapping our feet Adrift in our fantasy dance I do not want this dream to end To wake up and find I’m alone But dawn breaks in to apprehend Into the real world, I’m thrown I await night’s darkness to sleep To dream of my love and our dance I am lost in fantasy deep Hope this will last longer perchance
3rd April 2022 Syllable count: 8.8.8.8.8.8.8.8
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 4/13/2022 10:13:00 AM
How did I miss this wonderful write??? Late but "Congratulations" on your win. Have a Great/Blessed Easter............
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Date: 4/8/2022 1:19:00 PM
Jo, congratulations on your win in my Lay Contest with your wonderful poem and I love the quote also ~Constance
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Date: 4/8/2022 10:36:00 AM
Jo, congratulations on your win! Beautiful imagery especially the zephyr and the feather dancing! Have never seen this quote by Gene Kelly - an amazing dancer and an amazing man. Recently read about him. Sending you blessings of joyful dancing!
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Date: 4/5/2022 9:48:00 PM
So lovely. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/4/2022 5:18:00 PM
a real beauty, Jo. Big Congrats
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Date: 4/4/2022 4:59:00 PM
I hope your lovely dream continues, Jo. Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 4/4/2022 4:49:00 PM
Congratulations, Jo! Lovely poem!
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Date: 4/4/2022 3:05:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your creative dream themed winning work. Way to go. Congrats on your poem being on Constance's winners' list. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 4/4/2022 6:13:00 AM
Great hope expressed at the end. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/3/2022 3:06:00 PM
A dream to be kept alive forever. Nice Jo :)
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Date: 4/3/2022 8:31:00 AM
Lost in a an enchanted dream, Wonderful write Jo, best wishes
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Date: 4/3/2022 7:59:00 AM
Dear Jo, love is wonderful. Alas someday it will evaporate, My wife has been gone five years. I still think of her.
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