An Endless Dream Dance

"You dance love, and you dance joy and you dance dreams." - Gene Kelly I am lost in an endless dream My love and I are together Dancing hand in hand, we're a team Like the zephyr and a feather Swirling and swaying to the beat We are caught up in love's sweet trance To the music, tapping our feet Adrift in our fantasy dance I do not want this dream to end To wake up and find I’m alone But dawn breaks in to apprehend Into the real world, I’m thrown I await night’s darkness to sleep To dream of my love and our dance I am lost in fantasy deep Hope this will last longer perchance
3rd April 2022 Syllable count: 8.8.8.8.8.8.8.8
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 13, 2022 at 10:13 AM
How did I miss this wonderful write??? Late but "Congratulations" on your win. Have a Great/Blessed Easter............
La France Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 1:19 PM
Jo, congratulations on your win in my Lay Contest with your wonderful poem and I love the quote also ~Constance
Kauffman Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 10:36 AM
Jo, congratulations on your win! Beautiful imagery especially the zephyr and the feather dancing! Have never seen this quote by Gene Kelly - an amazing dancer and an amazing man. Recently read about him. Sending you blessings of joyful dancing!
Brul Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 9:48 PM
So lovely. Congratulations on your win!
Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 5:18 PM
a real beauty, Jo. Big Congrats
Peck Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 4:59 PM
I hope your lovely dream continues, Jo. Congratulations on your first place win!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 4:49 PM
Congratulations, Jo! Lovely poem!
Kendrick Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 3:05 PM
I enjoyed reading your creative dream themed winning work. Way to go. Congrats on your poem being on Constance's winners' list. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Alex Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 6:13 AM
Great hope expressed at the end. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Sands Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 3:06 PM
A dream to be kept alive forever. Nice Jo :)
May Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 8:31 AM
Lost in a an enchanted dream, Wonderful write Jo, best wishes
Buhagiar Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 7:59 AM
Dear Jo, love is wonderful. Alas someday it will evaporate, My wife has been gone five years. I still think of her.
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