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An End Coming to this journey, relief from all the pain. No longer watching you fall, and fall again. This surely will be the end of torrential rain, rain that has permeating every cell in my brain. I am able to perceive a beam of translucence light shinning down upon your history, exposing your fight against all your daemons, daemons now taking flight as you pursue many new adventures, journeys so bright that all will be left behind, daemons no longer in sight as you walk towards the future, where all will be alright and your spirit, on wings, will take you higher than a kite as you soar, like an eagle, far above a life filled with plight. B. J. “ A ” 2 February 1st 2017

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Date: 2/2/2017 6:22:00 PM
My very best to you and your daughter!
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William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 2/3/2017 12:51:00 PM
Good morning Sunlite Wanter : I really appreciate your thoughtful wishes for my Daughters future. Thank You !!! B. J. “A” 2
Date: 2/1/2017 8:50:00 PM
I don't know what you intended. But I felt tears.
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William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 2/2/2017 1:57:00 PM
Good morning Sunlite Wanter : To answer your question “ I don't know what you intended. ” Sunlite Wanter. It starts with a Daughter that has been on the edge of the Fentanyl Heroin Crisis, almost becoming a statistic !!!, lost her thumb in the early part of January !!! A prelude to what lay ahead, her future. And so Sunlite Wanter, “ torrential rain, rain that has permeating every cell in my brain. ”. She has seen the light “ a beam of translucence light shinning down upon your history, exposing your fight against all your daemons, ” as I do . The dream of a Dad “ daemons no longer in sight as you walk towards the future, where all will be alright and your spirit, on wings, will take you higher than a kite as you soar, like an eagle, far above a life filled with plight ” who hopes that this recovery is truly the journey she will remain on for the rest of her life ??? B. J. “A” 2