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An Enchanting House


My eyes are so sleepy and soon I am dreaming,
I find a staircase and leave my reality;
At the top of the stairs is a house enchanting,
My childhood home, oh such delightful fantasy.
        And I open the door,
          To a house I adore;
        And then I see Suzanne,
          Oh, the Lord had a plan . . . 

Suzanne would leave us weeping, but here was playing,
Oh, in this enchanted house dwells my family;
I hear Mom and Grandma in the kitchen talking,
Their laughter like tingling bells of a rhapsody.
        Down below an uproar,
           I go down to explore;
        Oh Dad I almost sang,
          A story Dad began . . . 

Dad was telling Grandpa a big tall tale laughing,
Then, I go up to my room where I was happy;
With my dolls and teddy bears and books still waiting,
My family, entwined in this sweet tapestry.
        Enchanted house for sure,
          And from my eyes tears pour;
        All dead - the Lord's command,
           I turned away and ran . . . 

                                               back to reality . . . 


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May 20, 2016

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For the contest, Enchanted House
sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron

Third Place
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Vincent Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 7:27 AM
What a lovely read....congratulations on winning the contest my dear Messoh V.
Flower Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 9:56 PM
Lovely write, Constance. Congrats on your win. ;)
Devnath  Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 1:47 PM
Excellent poem but with sad ending my lovely friend. Congratulation on your win. Loved always, bl
Raina Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 12:23 PM
Congrats on your win....liked your audio.
Dutta Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 11:00 AM
Congrats B.O. to win. Love.
La France Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 4:51 PM
Anisha, thanks for visiting with congratulations. ..
Chansarkar Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 8:02 AM
Painful but beautiful.congratulations Broken!
La France Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 4:53 PM
Sara thanks for visiting and for the congratulations
Haight Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 7:57 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest, Broken Wings. Sad, but also happy memories, beautifully written and spoken with your lovely voice. 7, Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 4:54 PM
Sandra thanks for the congratulations and for the compliment!
Ficklin Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 7:49 AM
I enjoyed the audio! What a good feature for those who can speak their poetry well. Congrats on your win
La France Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 4:55 PM
Lukas thanks for the congratulations and for the compliment!
Roper Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 10:34 PM
Broken Wings, great entry congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 4:56 PM
Eve thanks for visiting my poem with congratulations
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 9:59 PM
WOW! If only... Love it, Broken Wings, Congrats!
La France Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 4:58 PM
Kim thanks for visiting my poem with the wow and the congrats...
Negron Flores Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 7:39 PM
Congratulations Constance on the placement of the contest
La France Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 4:59 PM
Nayda thanks for the contest and for my win , honored. ..
Inman Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 12:23 PM
Beautiful write BW and a nice read as well.
La France Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 5:00 PM
James thanks for visiting and for the compliment. ..
Delaney Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 7:12 PM
Dear Constance: what an enchanting poem. Your voice was so soothing and although there are sad memories it is perfectly balanced with happy memories. Just like the house in the picture that seems precariously balanced and yet doesn't tip. What a clever girl to figure it out. I don't know how to stop the clicks on start and finish either. SuZ
La France Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 5:01 PM
Suzanne thanks for visiting my poem and for the nice comment, appreciate.
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