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An Empty Circle – Part 5 A clearing they did enter slow, though haste was of the days found deed Beyond the waters chanting flow of driftwood doors and ancient weed There stood a man in beard of white, not startled as they entered sure His staff possessed a jeweled light, a robe of crimson fabric bore Through misted haze of chanted sway they spoke for it was their command He turned to stare with eyes of gray and silence them with lifted hand “You words are known before you speak of beauty taken to the gate A potion, magic, which you seek to wish on hope and not too late” Upon the floor a contoured ring in seashell essence powered stain A cauldron empty smokeless sting it burned their eyes, their skin the same “Fear not for this shall be the path, Now step within this circled mark” As they obeyed, with wave of staff and suddenly their world was dark With woven lines of vibrant glare, a feeling ‘pon their chests fell tight Now breathless as their thoughts did share when sure of foot they stood in light As focus came their worried eyes, their castle stood as if a dream The shaman spoke, past sorrowed cries “Now take me promptly to your queen”

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Date: 8/11/2019 8:53:00 PM
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Date: 12/19/2016 2:23:00 PM
Pass the popcorn, bub. Great magical ride you're taking us all on, Chris. This is beautiful, enchanting poetry. You do our profession an honor w/your gifted pen. Love and joy to you, my poetic friend.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2016 2:50:00 PM
Thanks so much Freddie. I am happy you are enjoying this piece. I appreciate your kindness always my friend.
Date: 12/14/2016 11:10:00 PM
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Date: 12/14/2016 6:37:00 PM
I'm sooo agreeing with Darren!!! I can totally see the story rolling in front of me! (I'm in love by this story)
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Date: 12/13/2016 3:19:00 PM
ohh, a seer thickens the plot...grreat chaprt, chris,,huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 12/13/2016 4:27:00 PM
Thanks so very much Nette. I am happy you are enjoying this
Date: 12/13/2016 2:31:00 PM
I am not even reading words anymore Chris, I am in a film, and I can see the scenery and the people, everything. I know it's a poem, and it reads fluently, and the meter, cadence, everything is as it should, but I AM in a film and it's wonderful :D
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Chris Green
Date: 12/13/2016 4:26:00 PM
Can I have some of your popcorn Darren? :) Just kidding, thank so very much for this wonderful comment
Date: 12/13/2016 1:50:00 PM
WoW! This is good. You have a good imagination and it sored in this write. It's so good it's like I'm watching a movie. Great description of the shaman. I'm with Heidi, I'm waiting on the Queen too. A without a seven: -) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 12/13/2016 4:25:00 PM
Thanks so very much my sweet friend for sticking with me on this.
Date: 12/13/2016 1:25:00 PM
Oh my Chris. I am still waiting for the Queen!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/13/2016 4:25:00 PM
Thank you so much Heidi. I am so pleased you are following me on this.

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