Notes About The Poem

An Emptiness

Stubbornly persisting,
a numbness.
A nagging heartache
after rivulets of tears
have been cried.
A slow-burn grief
lingering in the pit 
of the soul.
A tidal wave of pain
stretching 
and folding back 
on itself.
A gaping hollow 
in the heart
that opens up again 
after being patched up.
An emptiness akin to
heaven without God,
a vase devoid of flowers,
a shelf with no books,
a water-free well
that only those
who have 
experienced loss
can comprehend.


Date written and posted: 05/19/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Chamberlain Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 11:48 AM
I have recently experienced a bereavement, and I couldn't agree more 'emptiness weighs the most'. Nicely penned. Congratulations on your winning placement.
Ibeh Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 2:00 PM
I'm very sorry for your loss, Joanna. Thank you for the congrats and visit, my friend.
Fowler Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 10:53 AM
Achingly beautiful Edward. Congrats on the win! :)
Ibeh Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 10:56 AM
Thank you so much, Linda:-)
Canerdy Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 9:21 AM
Your superb metaphors convey a deeply moving theme, Edward. CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice
Ibeh Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 10:56 AM
Thank you very much, Janice:-)
Roper Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 8:31 PM
Edward, well said, a hollow feeling deep inside a pain one can not explain … but it hurts, you feel lost of yourself , and how do we retrieve what we lost. Good luck in the contest.
Ibeh Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 6:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eve:-)
La France Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 4:21 PM
Edward, I know that feeling, this is wonderfully penned, best of luck ~
Ibeh Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 4:51 PM
Thank you so much, Constance:-) Most appreciated.
Gauthier Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 11:15 AM
Powerful, Edward. Love it.
Ibeh Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 11:52 AM
Thank you, Line:-)
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