An Emotional Farewell

so long, all the gilling snafferwisps
I wish I could say it was 
but those times we hodded abreem 
shook, then circled befrayingly
yet alas, when all is, and all was
I wish I could say we’ll hoot again
bray the broons and be bonning 
but for now, so long
my snafferwisps, so long
and may the muddled seeve midded





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Date: 6/26/2024 5:40:00 AM
Alas and alack. Fare thee well Clivester, we hardly knew ye...
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/26/2024 9:41:00 AM
Very creative
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 6/26/2024 9:04:00 AM
ooh I'm glad you asked, blather is just a word for jibberish, meaningless banter and wight is a ghoulish, demonic being so I combined the two! Snafferwisp I just made up becasue it sounded funny. I was going for nonsense words when used could invoke meaning and emotion, I hope it worked , I'll let readers judge that.
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/26/2024 6:09:00 AM
Btw, what's a Blatherwights and a Snafferwisp?
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 6/26/2024 5:45:00 AM
Don't panic, it's just a poem, thanks Tom
Date: 6/26/2024 3:10:00 AM
Does this mean you are leaving P.S Clive? Debx
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Deb M
Date: 6/26/2024 3:35:00 AM
Good!!!
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 6/26/2024 3:33:00 AM
No, just a silly poem. I'm into using made up words at the moment, I feel they convey a sense of meaning and emotion even though they are nonsense, I'm quite intruiged by that idea. I only post occasionally these days, maybe not for a week or a month but I'm still here. Thanks Deb
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