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An Egret

I watched an egret on a pond take flight and hid as best I could against a tree, not moving, breathless staying out of sight. Remembering, I close my eyes and see-- the view! A sweet reward for all my pains, it flew with whooshing wings right over me! Today, the tree is gone. The pond remains. Sometimes I walk the trail and feel an ache, to see an egret lest the mem’ry wane. Much older now, I know the risk I take, and yet, I come alone before first light to hear the sounds of nature as it wakes and maybe watch an egret taking flight. 1/8/2022

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Date: 4/11/2023 9:07:00 AM
Your poetry is so lovely, PS, I can't seem to get enough of it. :)
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Date: 9/15/2022 2:42:00 PM
I like this one…we all can relate to it., PS! Pangie xx
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Date: 9/16/2022 10:18:00 AM
Thank you Pangie. :) ps
Date: 2/5/2022 6:28:00 PM
Beautifully evocative images, skilfully assembled into this delightful Terza Rima. Lovely work. P.S.
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Date: 2/5/2022 6:47:00 PM
Thank you so much Geoffrey! Always delighted to have you visit :)
Date: 1/11/2022 11:21:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start til the end. God bless you.
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Date: 1/12/2022 7:53:00 AM
Thank you, Beata ~ps
Date: 1/11/2022 8:38:00 PM
Great writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/12/2022 7:53:00 AM
Thank you very much! ~ps
Date: 1/9/2022 7:08:00 AM
Beautiful poetry, well written, heartfelt. I really enjoyed your poem this morning P.S. Thanks for sharing you gift with us, :-) Bill I'm following you and your poetry now.
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Date: 1/9/2022 5:25:00 PM
I am glad you enjoyed the poem Bill! :)~ps
Date: 1/9/2022 5:53:00 AM
This is poetry at its finest - defined in structure, ethereal in topic and perfect in rhythm.
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Date: 1/9/2022 5:25:00 PM
Mark, thank you for your generous compliment. :) ~ps
Date: 1/9/2022 5:46:00 AM
Very skillfully written and lovely, P.S. Janice
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Date: 1/9/2022 8:18:00 AM
Thank you so much Janice. -ps
Date: 1/9/2022 2:28:00 AM
Something prehistoric about egrets, I was fishing in a river a few years back and hooked onto a small trout, as I was reeling it in an egret swooped down and stole it. True story' (lol) Enjoyed this, P.S. Have a nice weekend. Charlie
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Date: 1/9/2022 8:17:00 AM
Sorry about the loss of your fish but I think you got the better end of the trade—small trout for a great story! Glad you liked this one. :) -ps
Date: 1/8/2022 1:06:00 PM
Nature has giving you a great moment to remember. I hope you get a visit from your egret again. Great poem P.S.!
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Date: 1/8/2022 1:39:00 PM
Nature gives us so many moments to remember... Thank you so much for your visit and comment :) ~ps
Date: 1/8/2022 11:23:00 AM
Such a beautiful voice to your poem dwelling in sweet memories. A lovely write, PS.
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Date: 1/8/2022 12:49:00 PM
Thank you Vijay :) ~ps
Date: 1/8/2022 10:46:00 AM
I have some great photos of egret swallowing needlefish, tilapia, lizards, etc. Easy to photograph when their beak is filled! Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Date: 1/8/2022 11:01:00 AM
oh, wow! I bet those are beautiful. I am so glad you liked this one. :) ~ps

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