An Egret

I watched an egret on a pond take flight
and hid as best I could against a tree,
not moving, breathless staying out of sight.

Remembering, I close my eyes and see--
the view!  A sweet reward for all my pains,
it flew with whooshing wings right over me!

Today, the tree is gone.  The pond remains.
Sometimes I walk the trail and feel an ache,
to see an egret lest the mem’ry wane.

Much older now, I know the risk I take,
and yet, I come alone before first light
to hear the sounds of nature as it wakes
and maybe watch an egret taking flight.
 

1/8/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Peck Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 9:07 AM
Your poetry is so lovely, PS, I can't seem to get enough of it. :)
Romios Avatar
September 15, 2022 at 2:42 PM
I like this one…we all can relate to it., PS! Pangie xx
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September 16, 2022 at 10:18 AM
Thank you Pangie. :) ps
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February 5, 2022 at 6:28 PM
Beautifully evocative images, skilfully assembled into this delightful Terza Rima. Lovely work. P.S.
Awtry Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 6:47 PM
Thank you so much Geoffrey! Always delighted to have you visit :)
Agustin Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 11:21 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start til the end. God bless you.
Awtry Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 7:53 AM
Thank you, Beata ~ps
Alex Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 8:38 PM
Great writing. Congratulations!
Awtry Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 7:53 AM
Thank you very much! ~ps
Baker Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 7:08 AM
Beautiful poetry, well written, heartfelt. I really enjoyed your poem this morning P.S. Thanks for sharing you gift with us, :-) Bill I'm following you and your poetry now.
Awtry Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 5:25 PM
I am glad you enjoyed the poem Bill! :)~ps
Canerdy Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 5:46 AM
Very skillfully written and lovely, P.S. Janice
Awtry Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 8:18 AM
Thank you so much Janice. -ps
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January 9, 2022 at 2:28 AM
Something prehistoric about egrets, I was fishing in a river a few years back and hooked onto a small trout, as I was reeling it in an egret swooped down and stole it. True story' (lol) Enjoyed this, P.S. Have a nice weekend. Charlie
Awtry Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 8:17 AM
Sorry about the loss of your fish but I think you got the better end of the trade—small trout for a great story! Glad you liked this one. :) -ps
Rushing Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 1:06 PM
Nature has giving you a great moment to remember. I hope you get a visit from your egret again. Great poem P.S.!
Awtry Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 1:39 PM
Nature gives us so many moments to remember... Thank you so much for your visit and comment :) ~ps
Pandit Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 11:23 AM
Such a beautiful voice to your poem dwelling in sweet memories. A lovely write, PS.
Awtry Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 12:49 PM
Thank you Vijay :) ~ps
Leffanta Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 10:46 AM
I have some great photos of egret swallowing needlefish, tilapia, lizards, etc. Easy to photograph when their beak is filled! Enjoyed! Aloha!
Awtry Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 11:01 AM
oh, wow! I bet those are beautiful. I am so glad you liked this one. :) ~ps
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