An Autumn Woolgathering

As the time of long light gathers dark and draws near Frosty days appear to host falling leaves and rainbow showers I sit adrift dreaming while I wile away the grey hours Or reading a book left behind in summers overdrive gear It’s time to change my August dress for sleeves of Autumn wool I spend blustery ripe afternoons adorning my porch swing While in my mind I swim backwards to have a jolly good fling Still prone on my floaty at the local neighborhood pool Yet I love all the colors of pumpkins and apples delicious smell Falls glorious season of beauty is a tangible delight To ramble and stroll pathways or fly a windswept high kite If only I could motivate to move out of my warm summer shell written: 9-10-2019 Pick A Title, Vol 9 - Enclosed Rhyme Poetry Contest 2nd placement...with thanks Edward! Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
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Krutsinger Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 8:46 AM
Your imagery made this one glorious. "Falls glorious season of beauty is a tangible delight To ramble and stroll pathways or fly a windswept high kite" - Bravo my friend.
Wolf Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 10:02 PM
Motivate, motivate. Fun's over; everyone of the pool on the double!... Ha, ha... This is a nice enclosed rhyme for the contest, Jeanne. Best wishes, Gershon
Krutsinger Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 7:15 AM
I love reading your well-penned enclosed rhyme, but I do not write them. They are DIFFICULT. You have made this one light and airy, like a summers day!
Laurie Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 2:31 AM
G'day Jeanne … a very enjoyable closed rhyme verse Jeanne. You certainly make autumn what it is, a great time of the year - thank you Jeanne - Lindsay
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 6:57 PM
Now this is the way to write an Enclosed Rhyme Jeanne! I didn't even recognize it as one until I got to the bottom and read about it being for the contest. So many try this form and the rhyme sounds very forced. This is Excellent! I am sure it will be a top winner for you! xxoo
Green Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 3:56 PM
This was really well written Jeanne. I loved everything about this wonderful seasonal poem. Best wishes in the contest
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