An Autumn Tapestry

When you come to stay, you'll stay In a box,
much like any other. With its own rich vein
of concrete running between two green 
rivers of grass; supporting islands of tainted leaves 

too corrupt to remain at home for another season. 
A bird feeder stands lonely sentinel in a changing 
Eden, the only nod to nature's needy. Where a 
magpie, whose beak shares the accuracy of the 

boxer punching a moving bag, eats the once 
yearly offering of seed from its moving target. 
And two black - ringed turtle doves, the epitome 
of Athrodite's children, throw a lovers spat over

the single bird feeder. Whilst mellow music 
drifts upon the same wavelengths as the 
shrilling calls of the birds. One, more 
harmonious than the other.

A dog, lying in the heated comfort of the box,
tries to urge a bark, but settles for a growl, at 
an autumn intruder. It's head following the 
ostentatious jig of a robin, like a type writer

Jarring between upper and lower case. This
fleeting balsam that comes once every year, 
tasting of deep velvet shiraz, willingly shares 
its richness with those that bring a glass. 

No rights witheld. That's what you'll see when 
you come to stay. If you look.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/7/2015 5:07:00 PM
Simply brilliant... l am at a loss for words for the moment. After reading your Christmas piece, and seeing a glowing review referring to the rest of your stash I just had to try you again... and boy, am I glad I did. What are you doing here when you should be enjoying the plaudits of a much wider audience as a published author? This is tuly magnificent Terry. Best wishes, Keith
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/7/2015 5:23:00 PM
That's truly remarkable... you're a natural, what I'd call a 'unique'
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Terry Robinson
Date: 12/7/2015 5:19:00 PM
I've only been writing for three months
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/7/2015 5:08:00 PM
sorry... truly.
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