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An Autumn Stroll

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I so love an amber hazy forest, strolling winding paths bathed in bright colors; I love the fall leaves of crimson and rust, bird twitters and peeps. Oh, such sweet callers. Flying! A fire bird- a scarlet charmer, the forest is full of wonder and sights; and the smell of dark umber earth- delights. Deep in shadows I find saffron crocus, a yellow that only grows in autumn; and not far ginger grows in the coolness, I think this was once a garden winsome. Now, trailing vines with huge pumpkins awesome, tired- I close my eyes and breathe in the sun; leaning on a tree with bark cinnamon. ________________________ September 11, 2017 Standard Contest #40 Brian Strand

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Date: 9/14/2017 8:28:00 PM
This is gorgeous work with those words, Constance. I can't wait to try it but it might be difficult to match one like yours. Yours is one of the best I've seen in this contest so far.
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Date: 9/14/2017 10:03:00 AM
Amazingly written, Constance:)
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Date: 9/12/2017 9:07:00 PM
This is so lovely, Constance! Janice
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Date: 9/11/2017 6:58:00 PM
Oh this is so sweet, a garden full of huge pumpkins, my paradise for sure! I truly loved reading your very awesome poem this evening! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/11/2017 5:14:00 PM
Amazing. Very well written! Good luck in the contest :)
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