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An Autumn Stroll

I so love an amber hazy forest, strolling winding paths bathed in bright colors; I love the fall leaves of crimson and rust, bird twitters and peeps. Oh, such sweet callers. Flying! A fire bird- a scarlet charmer, the forest is full of wonder and sights; and the smell of dark umber earth- delights. Deep in shadows I find saffron crocus, a yellow that only grows in autumn; and not far ginger grows in the coolness, I think this was once a garden winsome. Now, trailing vines with huge pumpkins awesome, tired- I close my eyes and breathe in the sun; leaning on a tree with bark cinnamon. ________________________ September 11, 2017 Standard Contest #40 Brian Strand
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Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 8:28 PM
This is gorgeous work with those words, Constance. I can't wait to try it but it might be difficult to match one like yours. Yours is one of the best I've seen in this contest so far.
Daniel Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 10:03 AM
Amazingly written, Constance:)
Canerdy Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 9:07 PM
This is so lovely, Constance! Janice
Sivey Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 6:58 PM
Oh this is so sweet, a garden full of huge pumpkins, my paradise for sure! I truly loved reading your very awesome poem this evening! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!
Sands Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 5:14 PM
Amazing. Very well written! Good luck in the contest :)
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