Andrea Dietrich Poet Cinquain

Notes About The Poem

An Autumn Stroll

Strolling,
We encounter
Fragrant dappled apples,
Low-hanging and creating an
Archway

Passing
Underneath trees,
Inhaling fruits’ sweetness,
Impetuously you give me
Kisses

Holding
One another
In afternoon’s sunlight,
Blissfully by murmuring wind 
Caressed

Sparrows
Serenade us
Until finally we
Are enveloped by autumnal 
Twilight


Written 10/23/2015 
Submitted March 31, 2023 
for 'A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE no 1205' Poetry Contest

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Regina Mcintosh April 4, 2023 at 10:16 AM Love this one! Congratulations and God bless you! Love, Gina

Joanna Daniel April 3, 2023 at 7:49 PM Wonderful, Andrea, congratulations:)

Heather Ober November 5, 2015 at 7:13 AM This is so lovely. Autumn is my favourite time of year and you have captured its magical qualities perfectly. Also, thank you so much for your comment on my latest haibun. I am so honoured that you liked it so much :)

Sandra Haight November 1, 2015 at 3:50 PM Wonderful imagery in your string of Cinquains, Andrea. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong October 31, 2015 at 2:46 AM I love these Andrea. Congratulations on your win!

Skat A October 29, 2015 at 9:07 PM Andrea,, Congratulations on your "Autumn Stroll win." Love SKAT

Kim Merryman October 28, 2015 at 9:36 PM Delightful autumn images, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jennifer Walker October 28, 2015 at 5:42 PM Beautiful romantic poem.

Charlotte Puddifoot October 27, 2015 at 5:44 PM dropping back with my congrats, andrea, i knew this romantic one would do very well! :) my dappled apples were in my poem 'describing autumn', it was a while ago

Greg Hoffman October 27, 2015 at 2:26 PM Stopping back to say congrats on your win, nicely done

Daver Austin October 27, 2015 at 11:14 AM "Impetuously, you give me kisses." Great line, Andrea. It brings the whole stroll to life. Love, daver

Monterey Sirak October 27, 2015 at 6:14 AM Congrats on your win! Lovely string of cinquains. I love the sparrow serenade at the end.

Connie Marcum Wong October 27, 2015 at 4:43 AM Congratulations on your wonderful win with this excellent entry Andrea! I am kicking myself for forgetting to enter my poem Call of the wild in Casarah's contest. I know you have done that too before.

Michael Tor October 26, 2015 at 9:38 PM Beautiful write Andrea another Winner!!!!

Balveen Cheema October 26, 2015 at 9:17 PM Well Andrea, we've got more than brownie points as you wished! Congrats on this beautiful win! I thought we had to write only one cinquain. The form is also so attractive! Love, Balveen

CayCay Godwin October 26, 2015 at 8:35 PM I love this, I love dappled apples, sweetness and kisses. So enjoyable, I love strolling through the words ... CayCay

Lindsay Laurie October 26, 2015 at 6:20 PM G'day Andrea... very calming as is the spirit of autumn - thank you Andrea -Lindsay

Thomas Martin October 26, 2015 at 1:01 PM Well done, Andrea! Enjoyed your wonderful words.

James Inman October 25, 2015 at 1:58 PM Been a while since I had a day like that, miss it. Lovely, lovely.

Robert Lindley October 24, 2015 at 7:32 PM BEAUTIFUL IN EVERY WAY MY FRIEND. I never do these type contests. Too hard for me to create the actual image. A7

Constance La France October 24, 2015 at 5:15 PM Andrea, this is so beautifully penned, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my Autumn Stroll ~~

Njeri Hunjeri October 24, 2015 at 4:03 PM Very nice! Beaufiful from beginning to end. I enjoyed. 7+

Joe Maverick October 24, 2015 at 2:59 PM I want to know if you managed to find your way back? tsk tsk staying until dark..' bye the way well done..' p s take a flashlight next time..'

Sara Kendrick October 24, 2015 at 2:28 PM Ahh!!! So romantic..Reads like a winner to me..When I cook the whole morning is spent in the kitchen..Sara

Greg Hoffman October 24, 2015 at 2:13 PM 4 winners telling a story, good luck in the contest. Speaking of 4, I really like the last four words together. Well done

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