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An Autumn Stroll

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Strolling, We encounter Fragrant dappled apples, Low-hanging and creating an Archway Passing Underneath trees, Inhaling fruits’ sweetness, Impetuously you give me Kisses Holding One another In afternoon’s sunlight, Blissfully by murmuring wind Caressed Sparrows Serenade us Until finally we Are enveloped by autumnal Twilight Written 10/23/2015 Submitted March 31, 2023 for 'A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE no 1205' Poetry Contest

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/4/2023 10:16:00 AM

Love this one! Congratulations and God bless you! Love, Gina

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/3/2023 7:49:00 PM

Wonderful, Andrea, congratulations:)

Heather Ober

Date: 11/5/2015 7:13:00 AM

This is so lovely. Autumn is my favourite time of year and you have captured its magical qualities perfectly. Also, thank you so much for your comment on my latest haibun. I am so honoured that you liked it so much :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/1/2015 3:50:00 PM

Wonderful imagery in your string of Cinquains, Andrea. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/31/2015 2:46:00 AM

I love these Andrea. Congratulations on your win!

Skat A

Date: 10/29/2015 9:07:00 PM

Andrea,, Congratulations on your "Autumn Stroll win." Love SKAT

Kim Merryman

Date: 10/28/2015 9:36:00 PM

Delightful autumn images, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jennifer Walker

Date: 10/28/2015 5:42:00 PM

Beautiful romantic poem.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/27/2015 5:44:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats, andrea, i knew this romantic one would do very well! :) my dappled apples were in my poem 'describing autumn', it was a while ago

Greg Hoffman

Date: 10/27/2015 2:26:00 PM

Stopping back to say congrats on your win, nicely done

Daver Austin

Date: 10/27/2015 11:14:00 AM

"Impetuously, you give me kisses." Great line, Andrea. It brings the whole stroll to life. Love, daver

Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/27/2015 6:14:00 AM

Congrats on your win! Lovely string of cinquains. I love the sparrow serenade at the end.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/27/2015 4:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win with this excellent entry Andrea! I am kicking myself for forgetting to enter my poem Call of the wild in Casarah's contest. I know you have done that too before.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/26/2015 9:38:00 PM

Beautiful write Andrea another Winner!!!!

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/26/2015 9:17:00 PM

Well Andrea, we've got more than brownie points as you wished! Congrats on this beautiful win! I thought we had to write only one cinquain. The form is also so attractive! Love, Balveen

CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/26/2015 8:35:00 PM

I love this, I love dappled apples, sweetness and kisses. So enjoyable, I love strolling through the words ... CayCay

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/26/2015 6:20:00 PM

G'day Andrea... very calming as is the spirit of autumn - thank you Andrea -Lindsay

Thomas Martin

Date: 10/26/2015 1:01:00 PM

Well done, Andrea! Enjoyed your wonderful words.

James Inman

Date: 10/25/2015 1:58:00 PM

Been a while since I had a day like that, miss it. Lovely, lovely.

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/24/2015 7:32:00 PM

BEAUTIFUL IN EVERY WAY MY FRIEND. I never do these type contests. Too hard for me to create the actual image. A7

Constance La France

Date: 10/24/2015 5:15:00 PM

Andrea, this is so beautifully penned, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my Autumn Stroll ~~

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 10/24/2015 4:03:00 PM

Very nice! Beaufiful from beginning to end. I enjoyed. 7+

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/24/2015 2:59:00 PM

I want to know if you managed to find your way back? tsk tsk staying until dark..' bye the way well done..' p s take a flashlight next time..'

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/24/2015 2:28:00 PM

Ahh!!! So romantic..Reads like a winner to me..When I cook the whole morning is spent in the kitchen..Sara

Greg Hoffman

Date: 10/24/2015 2:13:00 PM

4 winners telling a story, good luck in the contest. Speaking of 4, I really like the last four words together. Well done