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An Autumn Haiku

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For :Line Gauthier's the 'Bite Size no69' Poetry Contest

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breeze caresses trees leaves tremble in sudden chill . . . red sun sparks twilight

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/25/2023 6:16:00 PM

Wonderful!

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 8/21/2023 5:41:00 PM

Love these Autumn lines, Andie My favorite time of year. SuZ

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 8/14/2023 3:30:00 AM

Hello Andrea,a wonderful haiku! Have a blessed week!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/5/2023 7:03:00 PM

Andrea, I can feel the crisp night air, a wonderful hiku, beautiful Autumn imagery.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/5/2023 6:45:00 PM

A lovely image! I feel as though I am there! I sense a storm coming on.

Michael Tor

Date: 8/5/2023 2:23:00 PM

Autumns imagery is perfected in your few words Andrea. Wonderfully written... Thanks for sharing...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/5/2023 2:12:00 PM

Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. I am anticipating a chill on the air and the change of color on the leaves. Thank you for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/5/2023 1:08:00 PM

A wonderful story in a few words. I love autumn. Guess it will be here soon. I am tried of the heat. Have a great day..............

Jim Slaughter

Date: 8/5/2023 11:00:00 AM

Can't happen soon enough for me. Great haiku, Andrea.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/5/2023 11:15:00 AM

thanks