Connie Marcum Wong Poet Verse

An Autumn Alouette

Feel the autumn breeze
Rustle through the trees.
View how painted leaves abound.
Watch the dappled sun
Play on every one
As they drift toward the ground.

See the harvest moon
Say good-bye too soon
As the colors fade away.
Let yourself be lost
In the lacey frost
While in mounds of leaves kids play.

September 2, 2014

~First Place~

A Lovely Alouette (revised)
Contest Judged:  9/14/2014 12:00:00 AM
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich |  Send Soup Mai

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Mark Peterson October 25, 2014 at 10:09 AM This stirred so many memories, and I enjoyed being carried along with the gift of your words, as I reflect on my favorite season. You paint emotion well. Connie Marcum Wong October 28, 2014 at 10:42 PM Thank you very much Mark. I love bathing in the vivid fall colors and being embraced by the cooler air, why fall is a favorite of mine too. Aloha, Connie

Monterey Sirak October 12, 2014 at 7:06 AM You have painted a lovely scene from my favorite season. I still love to jump in a big pile of leaves. Thank you for your comments on my poem Connie Marcum Wong October 28, 2014 at 10:40 PM Thank you for your nice comment Monterey. I love to read your talented poems. It is easy to write about autumn as it is my favorite season too. Aloha, Connie

Darlene Gifford October 8, 2014 at 6:39 AM Descriptive poem of Autumn. You put me there, playing with the children in the falling leaves. Connie Marcum Wong October 8, 2014 at 2:54 PM Thank you Darlene. I appreciate you commenting on my poem. Aloha, Connie

Matthew Anish October 7, 2014 at 10:07 PM Nice seasonal work here. Autumn is a time to reflect, enjoy the scenery, the football games before winter sets in. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Connie Marcum Wong October 7, 2014 at 10:20 PM Thank you Matthew. It is still very summer here with almost 100 percent humidity today. Aloha, Connie

Arthur Vaso October 5, 2014 at 10:47 PM This is so beautiful, or as we say tres belle!!! Connie Marcum Wong October 6, 2014 at 12:13 AM Merci beaucoup mon ami ! Aloha, Connie

Len Gasun October 4, 2014 at 4:40 AM You really captured the marvelous splendor of autumn in your creative words my dearest friend Connie. I can truly feel how much you adore the season. I Super love this excellent acrostic poem of yours. A topmost winner for me! Thank you so much for sharing! Belated thank you so much as well for taking your time to read and leave inspiring comments on my poems. My great honor to be kindly visited by one of my favourite poets. God bless you! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Maurice Yvonne October 1, 2014 at 10:43 PM Another great write, I hope I absorb some of the magic in your words. Connie Marcum Wong October 3, 2014 at 3:39 AM What a lovely comment you have given me Maurice. Thank you so much. Blessings, Connie

Andrea Dietrich September 30, 2014 at 7:08 PM Just dropping by to say hi and thanks for your recent comments this week. You are the best friend ever! Connie Marcum Wong October 3, 2014 at 3:39 AM So are you Andrea. You are very welcome. I don't post nearly as many poems as you do, but I am here when I can be. Cheers, Connie

Phyllis Babcock September 27, 2014 at 12:00 PM Beautiful description of what I am seeing now. The trees have all turned and are losing the leaves. The birds have returned south. Alberta has already had snow twice and so we await winter. Have my garden cleaned off but was not a good garden year. Thanks for thinking of me and reading my poem. I have been slack at posting lately and reading. love phyl Connie Marcum Wong September 27, 2014 at 6:25 PM I always enjoy reading your poetry Phyllis. It is so nice hearing from you. You live in such a beautiful place. Hawaii has its beauty too, but I miss the four seasons sometimes. Thank you for your comments on my poetry. Blessings, Connie

Harry Horsman September 26, 2014 at 9:06 AM my first chance to see a alouette entry, and oh this is divine, a worthy winner if i ever saw one! Connie Marcum Wong September 27, 2014 at 6:27 PM How sweet of you Harry. Thanks so much. Blessings, Connie

M. L. Kiser September 23, 2014 at 11:26 PM That takes me back to the autumns of my childhood. Great piece. Connie Marcum Wong September 25, 2014 at 3:31 AM Thank you for your comments on my poems. It is greatly appreciated. Blessings, Connie

Elaine George September 15, 2014 at 7:13 PM A breathtakingly beautiful Alouette, Connie. Many congrats on your win. Lainie Connie Marcum Wong September 25, 2014 at 3:30 AM I appreciate your wonderful comment Lainie. Thank you, Connie

Casarah Nance September 15, 2014 at 5:41 PM That is such a pleasure to read, you have made it a perfect piece, well done on your win :) Connie Marcum Wong September 25, 2014 at 3:29 AM Thank you very much Casarah. I adore autumn. Blessings, Connie

Paul Callus September 15, 2014 at 4:30 PM Congratulations on your top place win, Connie! Lovely take on autumn's beauty and the lines flow and dance. Much enjoyed! // paul Connie Marcum Wong September 15, 2014 at 5:05 PM Thank you Paul. I enjoyed your entry too! Hugs, Connie

Brenda Meier-Hans September 15, 2014 at 1:28 PM Congratulations for top place with this stunning poem Connie. Connie Marcum Wong September 15, 2014 at 3:54 PM Thank you very much Brenda. I don't enter that many contests and rarely get a top spot so I was very pleased to receive the honor. Blessings, Connie

Jan Allison September 15, 2014 at 1:04 PM Dropping back with my congrats Connie - this is a pure joy to read again:-) Hugs jan xx Jan Allison September 15, 2014 at 4:00 PM Me too there were some wonderful poems Andrea must had had a great time reading all the entries:-) Hugs jan xx Connie Marcum Wong September 15, 2014 at 3:53 PM Thank you very much Jan. I had a great time reading all the entries. hugs, Connie

Margaret Foster September 15, 2014 at 7:54 AM When I read this I can feel all the beauty of this glorious season. The lilt in your words bring the whole thing to life. Well done Connie. Connie Marcum Wong September 15, 2014 at 8:10 AM My kindle's battery was real low and somehow it put Dr. Upma's message here below? Thank you for your lovely comment Margaret. Connie Marcum Wong September 15, 2014 at 7:58 AM Thank you very much Dr. Upma! I enjoyed yours too!

Sara Kendrick September 15, 2014 at 7:45 AM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go for the contest..A very special one it is..Thanks for the visit to my page..I did not go to the doctor with the fall for I felt that I was okay that is no broken bones..I had a headache for days but not really bad for it would hit really hard then go away..Our grandson was so cute for he said, "I know what to do in case of an emergency go get momma"...I got a laugh from that..Sara Connie Marcum Wong September 15, 2014 at 8:07 AM Oh how cute, made me laugh too! I didn't go to the doctor either, but I am still sore a week later. My youngest daughter is a massage therapist, so I am lucky. She rubbed arnicia lotion on my neck right after it happenend as she saw me fall. Thanks a lot, and take care.

Barbara Gorelick September 15, 2014 at 7:25 AM Lovely to see you at the top of the list! And I see why..congrats. BG Connie Marcum Wong September 15, 2014 at 8:18 AM Thank you Barbara. It rarely happens, but I am just happy to get on the winner's list. Hugs, Connie

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 15, 2014 at 7:11 AM Well don Connie love xx Connie Marcum Wong September 15, 2014 at 8:16 AM Thank you very much Mandy!hugs, Connie

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 15, 2014 at 6:05 AM Connie a very wonderful write here , congrats on top place win! Lovely final line...In mounds of leaves kids play .. is so real n true! Connie Marcum Wong September 15, 2014 at 8:14 AM Well thank you so much. I answered this and it wound up under Margaret's reply. My kindle's battery was too low and it makes mistakes when that happens.

Regina Mcintosh September 15, 2014 at 12:10 AM Beautiful. I love it. God bless you with love & prayers, ~ Gina ~ Connie Marcum Wong September 15, 2014 at 12:49 AM Thank you so much Gina. I appreciate your kind words and prayers. Blessings, Connie

Andrea Dietrich September 15, 2014 at 12:03 AM OH MY, it's my wonderful friend and poet, Connie. Well, guess what? YOU , my dear, have produced a flawless example of Jan's form. I bet she will be proud of you. I don't believe one other person got the meter as perfectly as you did. To top it off, you had beautiful imagery. congrats for your win. Andrea Dietrich September 15, 2014 at 8:30 AM I did a blog about your poem too, Connie. I hope the poets will take note of the way the meter is to be done for jan's form Connie Marcum Wong September 15, 2014 at 12:46 AM Thank you so much Andrea! This makes my night! I have come to love the lyrical rhythm and sound of Jan's lovely form. I feel very honered that you enjoyed my poem enough to give it your number one spot. Mahalo Nui Loa!

Joseph May September 14, 2014 at 1:38 PM Beautifully penned Connie....Thank you for your very kind words....love

Maurice Yvonne September 14, 2014 at 1:04 PM exactly that a lovely alouette. i hope you rank high in the contest.

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