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An Autumn Almanac

behind window's pane i sense the still of the sky... spent leaves whirl on by © Harry J Horsman 2021

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Date: 9/7/2022 3:01:00 AM
Good Morning hh. Hi. And what beautiful leaves autumn has. I turned to this entry because of the title. There is no other season as her. Wonderful execution. Have a wonderful day. Blessings always.
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Date: 10/12/2021 12:40:00 AM
Enjoyed the flavour of the poem, Harry...Autumn is such a beautifully melancholy time of year. Strange little contradiction with the still sky contrasting the whirling leaves -- but works well! My very best regards! :) john
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Date: 10/5/2021 8:47:00 PM
A seasonal write that says much about our fall season. I enjoyed this fine Senryu, Harry. Hope that you are well + enjoying these autumn days. Cheers, Brian
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Date: 9/19/2021 4:05:00 PM
Beautiful, Harry. I can feel Autumn as I read it!
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Date: 9/6/2021 4:26:00 AM
excellent description and I love the title too Harry:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/2/2021 6:08:00 AM
I love the poem, and that also includes the title, Harry. I can feel the autumnal, atmosphere. ~ Best regards // paul
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Date: 8/31/2021 3:58:00 AM
Lovely Haiku my friend. A beautiful scene. God Bless and thanks so much for the many lovely reviews. God Bless and I could use some prayer if you don't mind. JB
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Date: 8/31/2021 2:27:00 AM
An evocative image Harry, not easy to capture these moments in a few lines, but your senryu certainly paints a full autumnal picture, cheers David
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Date: 8/29/2021 11:03:00 AM
Wonderful senryu! Many images come to mind!
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Date: 8/29/2021 6:19:00 AM
Harry you have a wise soul and a heart that never grows old. What a wonderful ingredient for poetry, stay well, we need your kind of poetry here. :)
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Date: 8/29/2021 4:47:00 AM
terse likewise descriptive (and more accurate than the weekly forecast 'round my metro) write dear poet. Have a grand autumn sir...much love, james
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Date: 8/28/2021 10:22:00 PM
What an exquisite poem! It shows so much with such few words. You have a gift of doing that.
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Date: 8/28/2021 9:12:00 AM
I love the Autumn time and I love this Autumn write. "Beautiful" Have a blessed day/weekend..............
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Date: 8/27/2021 2:37:00 PM
Enjoyed this Harry, flow meaning and inspiration '
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Date: 8/26/2021 11:11:00 AM
Such a beautiful imagery you created of the Autumn dear Harry... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/26/2021 7:18:00 AM
Very nice haiku, Harry! The whirl of leaves outside your window! Carol Louise
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Date: 8/25/2021 3:50:00 AM
I like this one. Very creative work. Thanks for your visit to my page. I think we are all on the mend. Our grandson who has had it(coronavirus) just like us wasn't hardly sick at all but the old people here are hard hit. Sara
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Date: 8/24/2021 1:09:00 PM
Your beautiful poem makes me glad that autumn is coming, Harry. This is a fave. :)
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Date: 8/24/2021 9:10:00 AM
Wonderful senryu, harry. With three short lines you have beautifully described autumn.
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Date: 8/24/2021 8:40:00 AM
You have done it again Harry ...in just a few lines. Painted with your words a sense of time and place so eloquently. Love it ! Hugs to you, Susan :)
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Date: 8/24/2021 5:39:00 AM
Every line a wonderful image that speaks eloquently. Lovely write, Harry.
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Date: 8/24/2021 2:38:00 AM
Won't be long before we see that again Harry, there's a hint of autumn here. Tom
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Date: 8/24/2021 2:26:00 AM
Fabulous senryu.
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