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An Atheist's Christmas

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This is actually the 'Shadorma' form, introduced to me by my poetess friend Rhona Mcferran - thank you! (Also the 'Mom's carols' line has a double meaning for me, since my mother's name IS Carol!)

Frosty sky Lush local wood, chopped Evergreen Fragrant pine Fills our home with holidays Guiding star on top Spiced cider Peppermint cocoa Gingerbread Garlands, wreaths Holly berries sprinkle red Festive door greetings Mom's carols Of babes in mangers Three wise men Journey far Angels, shepherds, miracles Tradition belongs We are not Grim cheerless police Glad tidings We offer Yes, we say Merry Christmas In more than one way We believe Goodwill moves the world Candles lit Wish for peace You and I are more alike Labels camouflage Christmas Eve Stockings, cookies, snow Jesus and Santa teach Goodness, giving, to children My faith lies in these. 11/27/18

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/24/2020 8:18:00 PM

Sitting here alone on Christmas Eve, reading Christmas poems, and having a skeptic's view of the nativity, I was really impressed with your poem. Well written. Thanks for sharing, and, of course, congratulations on your win.

Constance La France

Date: 12/24/2020 1:50:00 AM

Michelle, congratulations on your win in my Christmas Poem old or new contest with this wonderful poem, Merry Christmas _Constance

L. J. Carber

Date: 12/23/2020 1:00:00 PM

There are people who speak of God; there are people who ponder God; but the best are those who have God in their hearts--and I suspect that's what counts with Him, whether you believe or not.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/22/2020 11:15:00 AM

It is a good "faith" dear friend as you see the "goodness" born every year in this season that hopefully continues through the year! I so enjoyed reading your poem that brings back wonderful memories in an aura of the warm and cozy celebration! Sending you blessings of the season and, yes, Merry Christmas!

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 12/22/2018 1:02:00 PM

Such a wonderful poem this is and I absolutely love reading it, well since it is 22 December today, so I wish you a merry Christmas and a really happy new year

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 12/29/2018 2:35:00 PM

Thank you, so glad you like it, hope your Christmas was good and you have a fun New Year's!

Winged Warrior

Date: 12/5/2018 6:20:00 AM

Wow!...very well executed Michelle...ready for a big win...love & light...^WW^

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 12/8/2018 4:12:00 PM

Sadly, didn't make the winner's list, but am happy you enjoyed it!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/1/2018 8:42:00 PM

Read this one again, and it is even better the second time around. So true! We all have so much in common that the labels obfuscate. Wonderful write, Michelle. This just resonates so with me and within me. Thank you for writing it. :) gw

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 12/3/2018 12:22:00 AM

Ultimately, we share more in common - that was the message I was trying to convey - so glad for your introspective comment!

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/29/2018 4:28:00 PM

Excellent poetry, and the message and understanding. it projects.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 12/3/2018 12:23:00 AM

Thank you, much appreciated!

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 11/28/2018 6:48:00 PM

This is terrific, Michelle! A very lovely use of one of my favorite forms!! ;)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/29/2018 12:57:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and kind comment, Rhona!

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 11/28/2018 6:44:00 PM

G'day Michelle … I'm not sure, but many have deserted the meaning of Christmas, but not the spirit of Christmas. It's a wonderful time for families and to show good will - thank you Michelle - Lindsay

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/29/2018 12:59:00 PM

Yes, I believe it's about being with family and showing kindness to each other - thanks for your comment!

Pat Adams

Date: 11/28/2018 5:09:00 PM

Very well written Michelle! My motto is what ever makes you feel better, roll with it!!!............80)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/29/2018 1:00:00 PM

We share the same motto, Pat, thanks for commenting!

Sand Blown

Date: 11/27/2018 7:19:00 PM

hohoho...right out of a 'griswald' christmas

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/27/2018 10:56:00 PM

Thanks, I love 'Christmas Vacation', watch it every year!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/27/2018 6:52:00 PM

Beautifully done. A wonderful word picture of the Holiday.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/27/2018 10:56:00 PM

Thank you so much, have a joyful holiday season!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/27/2018 6:49:00 PM

Splendid poetry, Michelle! You expressed your belief w/fine poetic articulation. I'm a Christ believer ... Santa, not so much. LoL! Wonderful poetry, it winter snow sparkles. Love and peace always.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/27/2018 11:01:00 PM

Thank you, Freddie, have a Merry Christmas! (See I do say it!)

Chris Green

Date: 11/27/2018 4:18:00 PM

This was wonderful Michelle and such a great message flows through your lines. Christmas is more than religion, it is a time of peace and friendship and happiness for most. Some may find sorrow in the day for good reason but still recognize friends and family as gifts. I really enjoyed this. Best of luck in the contest

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/27/2018 4:34:00 PM

Yes, friends and family are gifts, so happy you enjoyed this!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/27/2018 4:08:00 PM

Interesting take on Christmas...As I, a traditional Jew, have always maintained when challenged by narrow-minded co-religionists: What in heaven is wrong with 'Peace on Earth, Goodwill toward Men?!' (That usually silences them---although not always). Well-crafted! Season's best! ~ Gershon

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/27/2018 4:32:00 PM

So glad for your encouraging comments, season's greetings to you, too!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/27/2018 3:06:00 PM

People who have no faith in God can still have faith in their fellow men, Michelle. My own father was raised without religion and had all of the wonderful qualities you described so eloquently. My entry will be about him, but I'm still working on it. Best wishes in the contest!

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/27/2018 4:31:00 PM

Thank you for your comment, Carolyn (that's my mother's name too!)