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An Asian Outing At the Beach

Next day after the nightly match they hatched a plan
with the six of them piling into their van
arm wrestling going on in the back seat
the loser not wanting to admit defeat

On the way to their destination the van was swaying
with the driver from Asia doing a lot of praying
finally they arrived and disembarked
getting their coolers out which were well stocked

The six of them turned heads being recognized
with loud claps of thunder coming from their thighs
finding a good spot it took awhile for them to sit
gorging on watermelons spitting out the pits

Next they inhaled the hamburgers, hot dogs the whole feast
wanting a swim helping each other up on their feet
waddling down to the water was no piece of cake
on their way folks did quite a few double takes

That day there was a whole lot of shaking and chafing causing some grief
with sumarai wrestler buddha bellies sunbathing on the beach.


7-4-18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/12/2020 10:49:00 AM
Howl, totally got it, ha ha ha . . . ; )
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Date: 7/5/2018 1:40:00 PM
So so funny ... and the humorous images you penned was smile divine, Che. Lovely poem, written w/creative flair.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 7/6/2018 7:13:00 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Freddie; glad you liked it and found it funny!~Che :)
Date: 7/5/2018 11:51:00 AM
I would give anything for a Buddha Belly. Sounds like fun: In Prsence, we simply surrender to the moment. No Judgment. Thanks Che. Of course, shalom, shalom
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 7/6/2018 7:12:00 AM
Meanwhile I'm trying to get rid of mine lol! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Anil; really appreciate it!~Che :)
Date: 7/5/2018 8:23:00 AM
Bahahaha!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 7/6/2018 7:11:00 AM
Glad you got chuckle out of it Mike!~Che :)
Date: 7/4/2018 10:56:00 PM
Good story, Cheryl!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 7/5/2018 8:12:00 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Lyric Man; glad you liked it!~Che :)
Date: 7/4/2018 9:59:00 AM
Loved it Cheryl, could just picture the scene. Tom.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 7/4/2018 6:57:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Tom; glad you liked it!~Che :)
Date: 7/4/2018 8:36:00 AM
Love it, Cheryl! A fun write!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 7/4/2018 8:39:00 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Kim; I'm glad you liked it and Happy 4th of July!~Che :)

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