An Apology For Love

He had doubt about telling love … to laities.
Doubt does sprout, and he stopped writing, Ladies,
Not lines, nor about wines, yet about his love,
But he thought: ought I not to find why and how?   

He found that Plato, not NATO, nor Tomato, 
Warned and scorned at us for writing about love, 
Yet he taught and wrote a text on love; this Plato
Did, and he hid his love that he did like a dove.

“Love is not climate, it's private," thought laities;
So, they said, “Hey, No love in lines; it’s private”; 
Donne, a great one, told his love….to pieties,  
And when I meet my friends, we just dissect climate

This tells us why he feels shy and does not write 
On his love, and how this torments him like a blight,
And I'm sure we can write on love: lily, pure white
And dispel this spell as sun does expel, sheer night.  


A 4th Place* in the following contest (judged on Nov. 19, 2020)

Nov. 12, 2020
In Rhymes Sublime Poetry Contest
Contest sponsor: Joseph May
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Krutsinger Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 2:45 AM
I like this very much. "But he thought: ought I not to find why and how?" - I liked this technique of putting two rhyming words back to back.
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 3:04 PM
Thank you so much, Caren, for this impressively lovely comment!!
Kauffman Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 10:38 AM
Very well done, Newton. Love your reference to John Donne. Your write reminds me of his style. I hope you never stop writing about the most complex and profound subject in all of life - Love. Congratulations on your win!
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 3:02 PM
Thank you so much, Sam, for this impressively great comment, congratulations and the complement!!
May Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 8:38 AM
Very nicely penned Newton, Congrats on your win..
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 3:01 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph, for the great comment and the placement!!
Fowler Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 8:24 AM
Nice rhyming Newt! Congratulations on the win! Linda
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 1:11 PM
Thank you so much, Linda, for your great comment!!
Downing  Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 6:59 PM
WOW!! Great job, Newton, this is fantastic :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 7:03 PM
Thank you so much, Akkina, for this sweet comment!!
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 5:35 PM
wow, you even got a double internal rhyme in on that one stanza. GREAT rhyming, my friend!! Thanks so much for visiting my poetry this week. I am finally trying to catch up on three days worth of comments in my inbox !
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 7:03 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this impressively beautiful comment and the complement!!
Rose  Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 7:50 AM
lol this is definitely sublime, I love the way you weaved the words inside your love story. Have a blessed day dear poet friend.
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 12:25 PM
Thank you so much, Pixie, for this great comment!!
Edmonds  Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 5:59 PM
A mighty fine rhyme sublime poem Newton. We should write of our love, for someone special, for ourselves, for all things wonderful and it’s magical spells. Belle
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 6:38 PM
Thank you so much, Belle, for this amazingly adorable comment and the suggestions!!
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