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An Apology For Love

He had doubt about telling love … to laities. Doubt does sprout, and he stopped writing, Ladies, Not lines, nor about wines, yet about his love, But he thought: ought I not to find why and how? He found that Plato, not NATO, nor Tomato, Warned and scorned at us for writing about love, Yet he taught and wrote a text on love; this Plato Did, and he hid his love that he did like a dove. “Love is not climate, it's private," thought laities; So, they said, “Hey, No love in lines; it’s private”; Donne, a great one, told his love….to pieties, And when I meet my friends, we just dissect climate This tells us why he feels shy and does not write On his love, and how this torments him like a blight, And I'm sure we can write on love: lily, pure white And dispel this spell as sun does expel, sheer night. A 4th Place* in the following contest (judged on Nov. 19, 2020) Nov. 12, 2020 In Rhymes Sublime Poetry Contest Contest sponsor: Joseph May

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Date: 11/28/2020 2:45:00 AM
I like this very much. "But he thought: ought I not to find why and how?" - I liked this technique of putting two rhyming words back to back.
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 11/28/2020 3:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caren, for this impressively lovely comment!!
Date: 11/20/2020 10:38:00 AM
Very well done, Newton. Love your reference to John Donne. Your write reminds me of his style. I hope you never stop writing about the most complex and profound subject in all of life - Love. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/20/2020 3:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sam, for this impressively great comment, congratulations and the complement!!
Date: 11/19/2020 8:38:00 AM
Very nicely penned Newton, Congrats on your win..
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 11/20/2020 3:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph, for the great comment and the placement!!
Date: 11/19/2020 8:24:00 AM
Nice rhyming Newt! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 11/19/2020 1:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda, for your great comment!!
Date: 11/13/2020 6:59:00 PM
WOW!! Great job, Newton, this is fantastic :)
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 11/13/2020 7:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, Akkina, for this sweet comment!!
Date: 11/13/2020 5:35:00 PM
wow, you even got a double internal rhyme in on that one stanza. GREAT rhyming, my friend!! Thanks so much for visiting my poetry this week. I am finally trying to catch up on three days worth of comments in my inbox !
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 11/13/2020 7:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this impressively beautiful comment and the complement!!
Date: 11/13/2020 7:50:00 AM
lol this is definitely sublime, I love the way you weaved the words inside your love story. Have a blessed day dear poet friend.
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 11/13/2020 12:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Pixie, for this great comment!!
Date: 11/12/2020 5:59:00 PM
A mighty fine rhyme sublime poem Newton. We should write of our love, for someone special, for ourselves, for all things wonderful and it’s magical spells. Belle
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 11/12/2020 6:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Belle, for this amazingly adorable comment and the suggestions!!

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