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An Aphrodisiac In My Cereal

Poems are just rolling out these days Maybe something's been added to my cereal Or maybe the water in my morning coffee It's definitely something unreal Love you say, could that be the reason? This feeling seems quite reminiscent It's been quite awhile but we never do forget This feeling of love so MAGNIFICENT Whatever the reason, whatever the cause Really hope it lingers for a while Like no other feeling, this passion divine Been wearing a perpetual smile Am I dreaming, gonna pinch myself hard Really seems too good to be true But I won't rock the boat, gonna let it all flow It's Heaven, between me and you Am I gushing too much, tell me WHOAA BACK Would try but there's no guarantee Maybe an aphrodisiac's been added to my cereal Something strange is happening to me © Jack Ellison 2013

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Date: 9/25/2013 8:02:00 AM
I'll have what you're having!!!!! Very awesome Jack......:-)
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Date: 9/19/2013 5:28:00 AM
This is one of your best writes ever, the rhyme and flow is perfect and the message is quite wonderful too...and funny! I truly loved reading this glorious poem this morning my friend! What a fantastic piece, lovely poem, Great Work!! By the way, my surgery went well, I'm doing pretty good, a bit sore but that's to be expected! That's why I'm a wee bit behind on things...I will have only limited time online, my wife will take me off so I can rest...it's hard on me to sit up for a long time!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/19/2013 5:47:00 AM
My dear friend Russell, you told a while back you were going in for what I thought were some tests. So it WAS surgery... my heart and soul are with you my friend for a speedy and complete recovery! Take care, mate!
Date: 9/18/2013 10:40:00 AM
Jack! Jack! Jack!... Nothing strange is happening to you... All good poets ARE STRANGE! Just ask anyone around here... I will... as soon as they get back from going over Acorn Falls! Beginning to get kinda lonely here... Your poems always stir something in the little guys... Maybe I should go join them, too... If you can't beat them... Join Em I always say... LOL... Look out guys... Hee I come! And don't pay any attntion to my swim suit!... Yeh! It's a groaner... Kids! Always the critics!... LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/19/2013 5:48:00 AM
"All good poets ARE STRANGE!" LOL We sure prove that, don't we? Love to you and all your guys... xoxoxoxoxox
Date: 9/18/2013 8:43:00 AM
Your title & this writing almost had me in tears. I salute you with my bowl of Cinnamon Toast Crunch. ;-)
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Date: 9/18/2013 8:55:00 AM
Big tickle! Enjoy your Cinnamon Toast Crunch!!! LOL Have a super duper day!
Date: 9/18/2013 7:09:00 AM
Jack....Girls in short shorts...NOW YOU ARE BEING NAUGHTY! ;) Aphrodisiacs you say? Hmmmmmm....find some and post a package over to Beirut. Although, to be honest...I DON'T NEED ANY! HA HA! I can give as good as I get. Take care, sweetie!
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Date: 9/18/2013 7:16:00 AM
I have NEVER STOPPED being naughty! Why would I want to do a silly thing like that! Love the ladies... STILL... it never goes away! Your are right... YOU sure don't need any aphrodisiac! Love ya Miss Boop! xoxoxoxox

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