An Antichrist In Guyana

In San Francisco, he started his crusade to teach the word of God and all good He made. His followers, even though penurious, gave him all they had; they were oblivious. He taught them how to atone for sins and pray. To a much better life, Jones would show the way. To South America, they followed Jim down. In the thick hot jungle, they built their Jonestown. Soon, there was no love, peace, and no sanctity. Instead, there was pain, deceit, and cruelty. A California congressman arrived there to alleviate the relatives’ despair. However, his findings would not be revealed. He and his party met their deaths on the field. Jones tested his children’s loyalty later. By drinking poison, they met their Creator Ubiquitous death with not a single sound; over nine hundred lifeless bodies were found! He was once a shepherd purveying God’s grace, leading most of his flock to death and disgrace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/1/2012 6:26:00 PM
Any extremist is dangerous. This was a massive tragedy and no one has ever figured out exactly how everything went down.
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Date: 1/27/2012 8:01:00 AM
This was such a tragedy. You did a good job of recounting this horror story in poetic form. Love, Kim
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Date: 1/26/2012 4:58:00 PM
I remember this tragedy and I can't believe that since Jonestown, there have been so many others that followed....Good reminder to all, Robert. Well done! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/26/2012 1:37:00 PM
Hi Robert..I have to save this one bc it is a true story and soo soo sad. When religion gets distorted and egos grow bigger than they should, these kinds of things happen. You did a phenom job putting this horrible historical event to rhyme...saving it for my favs...Ps...do I get a prize for being the first reader??
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Date: 1/26/2012 2:36:00 PM
I wish I could give you a prize Gwen. I remember this infamous event so well because it happened just three days before my 22nd birthday. Check out my acrostic poem "The Midwest Boy Killer". That poem was about John Wayne Gacy who murdered 33 boys around the same time back in 1978,
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