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An Answer To a Prayer

AN ANSWER TO A PRAYER What exhilaration, What fun, what joy, A prayer’s been answered My angel, my boy! I felt you inside me, You tumbled you kicked, And indeed if you didn’t I worried, got sick. In the first months 3 months, I didn’t eat much, I hated all perfumes, Which I didn’t dare touch! And then in the fourth month You made your first move, And gradually practiced, Your kick to improve. In the fifth and the sixth, I overate, The Doctor said to me, Hey Mom, watch your weight! Now in the seventh, I certainly ate less, But somehow I gained, How much is your guess? In the eighth I grew heavy, The weather was hot, I swam in our pool, And you kicked me a lot! The day was approaching, Two weeks left to go, But on the 31st March, You decided things were slow! So with a Jubilant, But big pain in my tummy. You my darling arrived at 5.20 p.m And made me a mummy!

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Date: 4/27/2019 5:00:00 PM
The miracle inside a mother is a gift bestowed upon us by God.. You are not only gifted with your adorable angel but also with a talent for poetry! A life of abundance.. a heart of perception and a pen of creation! A wonderful write that stirs the heart! Definitely a fave.. my love and hugs, dearest Jenny.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/28/2019 2:36:00 PM
Thank you dear Besma what a wonderful, kind and meaningful comment this is! It was and is indeed a miracle, as I was heart broken when I lost my first child after going through with a full term pregnancy - he was 5 days old when he died. What a true friend you are - I'm blessed, Hugs, Jennifer
Date: 2/13/2019 12:39:00 PM
- ... and I got a daughter a few years later - A beautiful poem from nine months of pregnancy ... and a blessed end, Jennifer :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/13/2019 1:04:00 PM
And how special they are to us. I remarried just over 18 years ago and my husband had a sun exactly the same age as the baby I lost would be - I'm also very close to him. Thank-you for sharing your past grief with me, I still visit the baby's grave if I'm in the area, but cemetery's in South Africa have become very dangerous to go alone, so only go with my husband and visit my parents also. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 1/15/2019 5:35:00 PM
I did not gain so much with my first one, the girl. But my second, the boy. OMG. He put 45 pounds on me.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/15/2019 11:31:00 PM
Hi Andrea, my first son I always say is CJ, Elias's son, same age as my first baby would have been , just came into my life eighteen years later I love him as my own, a very special person. Love and poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 1/15/2019 5:34:00 PM
this is really cute, Jennifer. WAs it one you had mentioned to me. One of your best!
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/15/2019 11:27:00 PM
Thanks my friend! I'm so happy you liked it, Ricky was Gods git to me, when you read cry of an angel and you will understand. Love and poetry hugs, Jenny
Date: 8/27/2018 1:47:00 PM
Love this cute poem! Great entertaining meter and rhyme
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/17/2018 9:00:00 AM
Hi Susan, I was ecstatic whilst pregnant because my prayer was answered. Every month was an adventure because I had a normal pregnancy - I think that's why the poem is cute! thank you so much. xoxo
Date: 8/23/2018 8:10:00 PM
G'day Jennifer … us blokes get off pretty light don't we. Nice rendition of a long nine months with an exhilarating finale - thank you Jennifer
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 8/24/2018 5:44:00 AM
Hi Lindsay, it was the happiest moment of my life especially as I had lost my first child. Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 8/20/2018 12:17:00 PM
Very sweet Jennifer,takes me back. I wish you lots of happiness with your son. And thank you for sharing such special moments with us. June.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 8/21/2018 7:48:00 AM
Thank-you Sylvia. With every year passing this poem still brings back the happiest memories. Especially so, because I lost my first child after going full term with my pregnancy. xoxo
Date: 8/20/2018 2:22:00 AM
A poem that shows us Prayer is powerful. I'm sure you treasure your angel every day. Thank you for these poems, I really am enjoying them. Kim
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 8/20/2018 7:31:00 AM
Hi there, A Year and a half later my prayer was answered - Ricky is a very special person. Everyone loves him. xxx

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