An Angel In Disguise

and deep I went, to the master's pit,
a leech, a brand-fire, saw I lit,  then
down among the throbbing roar, there 
stood a spectre, drenched in gore


when challenged, did he rant and rave, 
to find me in his abyss, his cave;
from whence he came I know not where,
for mine was but to answer, not enquire

then stripped I of his molten coat, in the
form of a goat, thinking was Beelzebub undone;
but to my great surprise, Apollyon it was, 
in masterly disguise

and seeing me now, Gabriel, in full light, he thrust his fiery 
sword to smite, the one God loves, (indeed tis me),
but I crushed his stink and broke off free

he turned and smite me yet again, the pain of death 
drove me insane; but lost the blow, in this great fore,
I called on my father for strength, four score; and I the
 "fallen angel", so to speak, plunged my sword into his beak


and when his black light came near no more, and threw his 
poison to the floor, to fight so thus, and give no quarter, was 
my want, his needful slaughter;

and now at twilights shimmering scar, of timid moonlight's
evil bar, the pit, when entered, carries no threat; for paid 
brave Gabriel,  Apollyon's debt.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/11/2015 5:42:00 AM
Great write Peter. Very discriptive. Love this. A 7 from me.
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Peter Lewis Holmes
Date: 2/11/2015 6:19:00 AM
Thanks Janet...I found it quite a challenge...Peter
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