An Ancient Place

Quaint town, orange sky and spitting roosters, a trail of mosaic remembrances translates into lavender hints of folks’ spiraled notes: women balancing baskets of corn strewn on the hips, a siege of fluted weeds meshing with tropical winds along the lake... being there, just there among ruined cathedrals and flared umbrellas I cannot touch: I think there is never an after… for cruising along roads leading to papaya huts, the numbered days wrap my flesh with a repertoire of flora, sitting upon the magic of rapture; amiably watching a madrigal of a fiesta… the carriage of lifted chants rippling on anointed elements of earth and fire. Those blessed statues, these I cannot caress, not even the letters in the museum which tamed stars of centuries’ quest: it can be cold just watching without holding. My eyes swallow the moon beautiful with some kind of soulful whiteness; my own river of reverie tipsy. Misty. For Silent One's Contest Enter the Your best poem with metaphors
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Sietesantos Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 2:33 PM
Vividly lovely as only your pen can do them! Congratulations, Nette, on a top win! Pandita
Cwiak Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 6:25 PM
Terrific write! Keep it up.
A  Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 6:25 PM
Nette, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 3:14 PM
Awesome use of metaphors !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
A. Sharma Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 1:25 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem nette! Masterful creative work!
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 5:13 PM
Your kind of poetry is MADE for metaphor. Congrats again, dearie!!
Roper Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 10:03 AM
Congrautulations on your win, a 7 Hugs Eve
K. Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 12:56 PM
Pang postcard ang dating, nette! Pwede ba maki-piyesta?? definitely a barrage of feast of images yet again! Congrats on your win! grabe antok na ako-- tapusin ko lang chocolates in between ---hugs!
Brown Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 9:01 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Come to Your Senses" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest Nette.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 5:43 AM
Congratulations nette well done. x
Mister Roboto Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 12:28 AM
Sounds like a special, big deal.....Hey, I don't think you need to explain about your punctuation and small caps...DO YOUR THING...Poetry is FREE!
Sweetheart Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 9:47 PM
CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON A TOP TEN WIN FOR THIS EXOTIC POETRY .. SUCH FANTASTIC WORDS ..OH...
Dietrich Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 5:56 PM
Simply marvelous. I LOVE it, Nette. Congratulations.
Goudreau Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 3:58 PM
Most beautiful nette! A masterpiece indeed and congratulations on your winnings. Tipsy, misty...master of fine art!
. Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 8:25 PM
congrast nette! saw your win too in the soup, and this piece just affirm your mastery in this art. beautiful, specially love those last lines
Poet Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 8:20 PM
Hey soup result is out and you won!! Visit the blogs.A big Congrats!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Onclaud Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 8:13 PM
thanks, all.. a very sacred moment for me..:)
Kendrick Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 2:51 PM
Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..So descriptive that I can see the scene..Thanks for stopping by and reading about the slug eating the one spot of jelly on the cat's plate..Sara
Sivey Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 2:31 PM
What a wonderful write full of color and imagery! I loved the flow of your poem and the tiny pieces of descriptions that I got to visualize and bask in! Such a fantastic write Nette! You outdid yourself with this one!! Awesome Work!!
Poet Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 9:48 AM
This is just mesmerizing Nette.I love your choice of words here.An excellent entry to Debi's contest.Best wishes.
Parker Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 9:35 AM
A riveting journey through time. I think that you should submit this poem to some History journals for publication! You gratuitously utilize colloquial and cultural tropes to present an enchanting picture of an exotic people.
Falotico Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 9:09 AM
A beautiful array of words and images.. You wrote a work of art with musical colors and words .... Best wishes in the contest... luv and long hugs Michael
Squyres Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 8:54 AM
Breathtaking !!! Lovely imagery !!!
B Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 8:46 AM
Nette you make me wish of myself a Time-Traveler. What a wonderful place this must be in ancient times and hopefully someday the stars will guide us all back to simpler, yet more meaningful and mystical times.
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