Kash Poet Poet Limerick

An Ambassador My First Car

An Ambassador with an antique touch
was my first car and I loved it much
could be started easily
even with my locker key
gears could be changed without using clutch.

Such a car was not easy to be found
each part except the horn used to make sound
part by part had to sell it
all parts were sold except seats
I used them to make a merry-go-round!



By:kash poet
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Placement:3rd;(March 2012)

Contest:My First Car

Sponsor:Carol Brown

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Gwendolen Song March 20, 2012 at 2:33 PM You might have had to "walk" a lot too with a car like this one, Kash..congrats on this slick limerick duet's success!,,,,Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2012 at 8:44 PM Kash, I'd have put this one even higher. You did SO well with this poem., Congratulations on your win. Luv, andrea

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 13, 2012 at 2:10 PM Congratulations Kash, well done xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 13, 2012 at 1:07 PM congrats Kash on a grand win for this exciting entry for first car.. excellent tale..

Carol Sunshine Brown March 13, 2012 at 7:17 AM Congratulations on your win and thank you for supporting "My First Car" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song March 8, 2012 at 11:52 AM A Merry-go-Round car?...sounds like a Looney Tune to me!! You had me crackin' up on the locker key line...that is so witty! Wonderful limerick! Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud March 8, 2012 at 11:32 AM lollll...shaking here from the details of how your car got dismantled bit by bit... toppers, kashi buddy!.:)huggs!.. wait for my next piece!

Andrea Dietrich March 7, 2012 at 10:52 PM hahahaha, you did a FUNNY one, Kash. Is this for real?? Me thinks you exaggerated this first car you had. GREAT job!!!

Black Eyed Susan March 7, 2012 at 10:48 AM ha! great story, especially the ending - very creative :)

Carolyn Devonshire March 7, 2012 at 10:39 AM Bet you loved that old car, Kash. Today the Ambassador would probably be considered a gas guzzler, but I love the way you described dismantling the car and using the seats to make a merry-go-round. I bet you could take a lemon and turnit into lemondade. Excellent use of humor will guarantee you a win! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels March 7, 2012 at 4:58 AM This one is a hoot Kash, absolutely enjoyed this :) Wilma