AN ALBERTINE GOODBYE-DODO

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a delicate petalled rose flutters slowly from on high, upon the green sward,to lie- dying sans a sigh

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/3/2024 3:03:00 PM

This is a beautiful, climbing rose, Brian. Your poem is filled with a plaintive, melancholy as the beautiful rose dies unseen and unnoticed. Thank you for this verse. Blessings and congratulations to you!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/29/2024 5:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/28/2024 9:28:00 PM

interesting line: upon the green sward. Congrats and thank you, Brian, for entering my contest!