An Adventure In Darkness

One night  returning  home from the marketplace 
Street lights  suddenly went out.
I could see the road  curving in the headlight of my car.
After driving for some time ,I reached a place
By the side  of a streamlet.
Yet there is no streamlet in my locality
Nor on the way  from that market place to my home.
Confused I turned back but reached at another place.
This time by the side of a rill ,water  hyacinth  floated,
Some houses standing quietly in the darkness
On  its other bank.
Again ,I failed to know where I was;
It seemed nature disguised herself in another garb.

Then, to my relief, in that lonely atmosphere
I saw some local youths loitering.
I asked them  for directions to  my locality.
One of them gave me directions of the routes 
I should take
I resumed driving my car to the direction he indicated .
After driving some distance  on the right turning roadway
I saw some women  standing  on the roadside
A  pressure lamp placed before them.
Oh, a  beautiful girl I saw among them !
She seemed  like a maiden in an oasis
To a tired wayfarer who lost his ways in the desert.

I politely asked them  for direction to my locality
Not sure, although told by those youths  which  direction to go.
One of them   told me to go further till a crossroad
There to turn left and drive to find my locality.
I again drove my car.
Then the street lamps illuminated the dark street  and  I knew
The place where I  was .
Oh, that was the place I frequented, and  it
Not far from my locality.

I reached home, finally out of a big puzzle.
But I felt  that night  I  had roamed to  unknown places
Exotic  in the darkness of the night .
It was an exciting experience . 

25th April 2008

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/10/2020 3:49:00 AM
Just dropped in to reply to your comment. Now I am glad I did. You are a great writer. It was a gripping story. You have a knack of transporting reader's to the place of write. You should write story books,novels. It will surely sell. Is this true incident? Thanks for your positive comment on my poem. It made me happy.You made my day. Since I became courageous I am happy. Take care. Warm regards, Rama
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Date: 3/2/2018 6:19:00 AM
Your story is unique..you kept me going till the end..that says a lot for your creative skills, Akham.
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Date: 3/2/2018 6:18:00 AM
Great imagery in your poem Akham..
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