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An Adonis-Like Body

Routinely walk the mall, almost every morning Girlies crowd around by the dozens without warning Try to discourage them These yummy femmes No use, with this Adonis-like body adorning

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/1/2020 10:51:00 AM

You need a bodyguard or they might take chunks out of you. Good day Jack Tom

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/1/2020 11:08:00 AM

That would well be painful! Will need lotsa pain killers!!!

Michael Tor

Date: 7/1/2020 10:36:00 AM

Must be nice Jack to get all that Harassment from the fillies. I'm sure your walks in the mall are by yourself don't think the wifey would be to happy with Jack , oops no Adonis getting so much attention... Have a nice day Jack, oops again I meant Adonis. lol...

Michael Tor
Date: 7/1/2020 11:12:00 PM

lol

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/1/2020 10:51:00 AM

Try harder to get the name right, Michael... it's Adonis, my middle name!!! Thanks... happy Canada Day my friend!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/1/2020 9:58:00 AM

Tee hee! A friend of mine who was a bike courier with me, a client nick named Adonis- now he's a reporter for CBC, so I get to hear one said Adonis on the radio ;), xomo!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/1/2020 10:22:00 AM

I'm sure you can imagine!!!! WOW from a courier to a reporter on CBC... WOW! Thinking of showing body downtown by the lake... I expect a huge crowd... mostly young fillies! LOL XOX